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Pentagonal Dodecahedron

Shelter we seek to protect all that is sacred, to us and our future, is like ice that floats on fresh water, protecting life below. Forces beyond our control stimulate a collision of antimatter & matter only good prevails. The stable gel we call life is in constant jeopardy of destruction. Every act of love thickens the ice, but the ice is thawing, leaving mankind closer to the collision. I urge all humans to re-double their efforts, see clearly the good, and never be satisfied 'till the ice is solid again 09/05/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2016 11:53:00 PM

So true, your message and meaning are on point, ... I don't think we can change the world or the age of first dawn. Hope the good bring more goodness. LINDA

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/22/2016 4:03:00 PM

You penned this well my friend, I must say. The word flows eloquent and the message is great. Excellent.........A.M.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/22/2016 1:40:00 PM

I've never thought of ice as much as you have me thinking of it now. Wonderful, thoughtful write.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/17/2016 8:41:00 AM

May we all work for that ice to be solid again dear friend..lovely post...Have a great weekend.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/15/2016 2:46:00 PM

The urge to love is strong here, James. It seems every great sacred master has urged love as a basic tenet. In the face of universal hate and violence, how can anything but love stem the course. Good work for all to read. Love, daver

Space Cadet

Date: 9/14/2016 10:25:00 PM

I keep coming back to this poem wanting more ! I dig it . Thank you for sharing. W

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2016 8:25:00 PM

the strength of this piece lies in its power to convince us to plod on, jimbo... beauotful.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2016 7:39:00 PM

Good advice but I fear selfish people will not comply.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/11/2016 8:06:00 AM

Great writing, James! For sure, the world of cause and effect often leads us where we do not want to go or be. Guard of feelings and emotions. I often tell myself, if I have to convince myself to do something or feel in a certain way, it is wrong. Truth needs no affirmation other than its presence.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/10/2016 1:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading the simplicity that points to complexity's here James, We can look and act of we can lift ourselves above a lot of hurdles, to be fair many of them 'manufactured' ones and the best antidote is to challenge this situation.'

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/9/2016 7:16:00 PM

I still have hope for humanity Jimbo, one act of love at the time....

Tim Smith

Date: 9/5/2016 6:05:00 PM

Great analogy Jim ... excellent advice