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Pensee: Dance of the Soul

summer
russet of buds
brushing lips of breeze's soft flight
petal sashaying in heat
waltzes like barefoot dusk

imaginationnaturei do not know?

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Daver Austin

December 3, 2013 at 4:07 PM

Movement and music. Love it. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

November 4, 2010 at 6:42 PM

how nice of you to share your indights, james... mnay thanks! warnest, nette

James Marshall Goff

November 4, 2010 at 4:14 PM

reminds me of northern minnesota "rose-hip-hunting" in the fall! jimbo

Nette Onclaud

November 3, 2010 at 6:23 AM

dave, thanks for dropping by... warmed by your response.. warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

November 3, 2010 at 6:22 AM

happy you enjoyed this, andrea.best wishes too! wanest, nette

Nette Onclaud

November 3, 2010 at 6:21 AM

sweet thanks, honesty.. warnest, nette

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2010 at 8:52 PM

this is a very romantic and lovely! andrea

Daver Austin

November 2, 2010 at 3:47 PM

Delicious! A beautiful zephyr. Love, Dave

Honesty Oimbo

November 2, 2010 at 9:33 AM

great haiku

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2010 at 4:01 AM

carolyn, you make me feel real good with your comment as i do revel at your own works.. more power to you and huggs! warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2010 at 4:00 AM

linda-marie, happy you liked this one... i do enjoy going to your poetry pages..mnay thanks warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2010 at 3:58 AM

hi kristi, enjoyed your charming reply... i love your brand of poetry...all the best! warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2010 at 3:57 AM

dr. ram,always a delight to hear from you.. thanks and keep the pen dripping with your wonderful words.. thank you so. warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2010 at 3:55 AM

please that you liked this one, deb. i admore your poetry... blessings! warmest, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

November 1, 2010 at 12:41 PM

When people think of poetry that creates beauty, this is exactly the type of work they long to read. Well done, Nette! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 1, 2010 at 8:16 AM

Lovely visual picture painted in your words today Nette.. luv your title.. its so magical luv.. thankxx for your always sweet comments on my writes...