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Penitence

In love’s limited life Equal are my losses and gains I’ve gained some tear’s drops in eyes And peace for ever lost Some wishes still remain to be met Some tears that I’ve not yet shed My heart still some stories keeps That could not ever come to my lips There are tears veiled by my smiles There are pains hidden by my liveliness The heart that gave me anguish and pain Today I am making its eyes rain My yearning that burnt me once Today I am putting it to flame I’m happy though that my heart’s wounds Are solace to some ones heart For, afflictions I am gifted with I know not whether a cure will come Non other will ever understand this pain If not burned in similar flame O my heart! Fret not, if you can Anguish is the destiny of man Sintra, Portugal. 20-6-2012

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Allan Koven

Date: 6/1/2013 7:35:00 PM

I can see your heart is embraced with love and yet pain yields in fits of despair. You have been born and blessed by a gentle and kind soul but like many others, you suffer the traumas of compassion. Keep writing. It is the balm that soothes and comforts and calms passion.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/29/2012 9:04:00 AM

elegant beauty in these lines of sorrowful tear drops Mohammad.. pain and suffering are a part of living life.. u express in poetry the depth of emotion u feel luv.. than kxx for sharing .. happy weekend..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2012 3:01:00 PM

Next to last stanza until we meet someone who has suffered like pain we can't know if anyone understands..That is why it is good to be supportive of another who has suffered like you...Thanks for stopping by my work, reading, and commenting..Your comments are always so uplifting..Sara

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/28/2012 5:29:00 PM

And who supports, except the virtuous, Sara. Thanks for your comments. Your words are invaluable for me. Each an every word of yours is dipped in the fragrance of sincerity and kindness. God Bless you. -Mohammad

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 6/22/2012 3:37:00 PM

The third paragraph is fantastic as is your writing. Wonderful write...Patrick

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/23/2012 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Patrick for your very kind comments.

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/21/2012 5:13:00 PM

great write Mohammad

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 6/21/2012 5:34:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation, Richard. God Bless You.