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Penguins

Wobbling tuxedo clad bowling pins saunter across a frozen wilderness

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/17/2008 5:06:00 PM

The only animal that's dressed for a formal. Have a wonderful day. Vince

Jacob Wölf

Date: 11/6/2008 5:43:00 PM

i am from guelph, ontario..... but sadly about 10 years ago we moved to georgia in the u.s......... i visit ocasionally but i miss it so much....."sniffle"......

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/6/2008 7:02:00 AM

Such a great description and the image makes me smile! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/6/2008 5:50:00 AM

So visual and extremely delightful! A Penguin is my IM icon. Love those amazing creatures. Thank you for your lovely comment! Love, Shar

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/5/2008 8:56:00 PM

Hi Valerie, I like this alot.Perfect description.BG

Jacob Wölf

Date: 11/5/2008 8:25:00 PM

what a funny way to describe a penguin.... very creative use of words