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Sounds a little bourgeoisie to put on a formal sit-down tea all dressed up with a bumblebee As she sets up under the willow tree it's the perfect antidote to a bout of ennui for sweet little adorable Penelope A couple of cookies fresh from the bakery a french custard that's sublimely velvety topped with a garnish of floral scented potpourri Oh how charming and delightful to be blessed with a child's spontaneity and find pleasure in such simplicity AP: 2nd place 2025

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Date: 5/19/2025 6:31:00 PM
This is GORGEOUS, Line. Love, love, love it. Smiles Galore, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2025 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~ most appreciated
Date: 5/19/2025 11:43:00 AM
Very cute! Enjoyed your wording!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2025 1:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim ~ most appreciated
Date: 5/19/2025 1:38:00 AM
Lovely poem, now I will now say here, but you would be surprised by a little girl who had tea at noon with a certain someone, a sort of history repeats story.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2025 1:27:00 PM
lol ~ sweet ~ thanks Arthur

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