Pendulous

Consciouness finds me and jerks me awake.
In a dusky dank cell closed in and opaque.

No circulation, my hands were bound!
My legs were tied, I couldn't move around!

My pulse takes on unbearable beat.
My mind is playing tricks, and then evilly repeats!

Swish, swish, came a hideous sound.
Closer and closer it creeps rendering me spellbound.

My skin crawls in the sweltering torridity.
The murky cell is horribly sooty.

Swish, swish; it slowly descends.
Eyes entranced, on a swinging pendulum.

Swish, swish it cuts off my shrill..
Whoosh, whoosh it contrives its kill.

The horrific night bargins with death.
I woke up startled and couldn't take a breath.

Finally, taking in my familiar surroundings.
I ponder on what, I was just dreaming.






note: This poem inspired me from Poes. Pit and the pendulum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fawcett Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 2:03 AM
Great write, Erin (love this Celtic name). Good luck in Tracy's inspiring contest. Love, Nigel
Richards Avatar
December 20, 2008 at 4:54 PM
Terrific entry for Tracy's contest! Good luck Erin, ...A great choice, and a great job! ~ Carrie
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