Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

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.                  Along the roadside
                         leaves scatter from the gust of
                              a bright yellow bus




   





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Submitted for "Images of Fall" contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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James Fraser August 29, 2009 at 1:55 PM Nice Haiku Carrie, all the best in Brian's contest, thank you for your lovely comments on my poems, much appreciated>>James

Brian Strand August 20, 2009 at 6:05 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno August 19, 2009 at 5:45 PM Beautiful work Carrie, great work...Raul

Doris Culverhouse August 18, 2009 at 3:25 PM back to school, I like the poem very much.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 18, 2009 at 6:36 AM Carrie, great Haiku for Brian's fall contest. Good luck if you enter it. Love, Carol

Brian Strand August 18, 2009 at 2:21 AM Thank you for your welcome comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2009 at 11:17 PM Ah, yes. The return to school approaches and these are the sights we shall soon see each day. Hope your summer was wonderful, Carrie. Enjoy the remaining days before the "bright yellow bus" ties up traffic! Love, Carolyn

Abe Lopez August 17, 2009 at 7:33 PM This poem is dear to me ...... I've been a bus driver for several years ansd have experienced many beautiful mornings... great write! one for my fav's

Christopher Higgins August 17, 2009 at 5:50 PM I am living the back to school...I love how this came alive..good work.