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. Along the roadside leaves scatter from the gust of a bright yellow bus * * * * Submitted for "Images of Fall" contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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James Fraser

Date: 8/29/2009 1:55:00 PM

Nice Haiku Carrie, all the best in Brian's contest, thank you for your lovely comments on my poems, much appreciated>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 8/20/2009 6:05:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/19/2009 5:45:00 PM

Beautiful work Carrie, great work...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/18/2009 3:25:00 PM

back to school, I like the poem very much.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2009 6:36:00 AM

Carrie, great Haiku for Brian's fall contest. Good luck if you enter it. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/18/2009 2:21:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2009 11:17:00 PM

Ah, yes. The return to school approaches and these are the sights we shall soon see each day. Hope your summer was wonderful, Carrie. Enjoy the remaining days before the "bright yellow bus" ties up traffic! Love, Carolyn

Abe Lopez

Date: 8/17/2009 7:33:00 PM

This poem is dear to me ...... I've been a bus driver for several years ansd have experienced many beautiful mornings... great write! one for my fav's

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/17/2009 5:50:00 PM

I am living the back to school...I love how this came alive..good work.