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Pencil

Pencil Into a tunnel A twist and a turn A point appears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Michael Jordan
Date: 1/24/2009 5:59:00 AM
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Maryam this short poem made me smile - Thanks for the memory - God Bless, MJ
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Robin L. Gass
Date: 1/23/2009 4:31:00 PM
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Ths is a great poem, Maryam and Chris descrbied it perfectly. Great job!, Love, Robin
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Christopher Higgins
Date: 1/23/2009 4:21:00 PM
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I love this..you made a sharpener a force in this poem. Brilliant!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 1/22/2009 6:01:00 PM
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So clever! Those are the little things we take for granted! Nice one!~ Carrie
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Jen H.
Date: 1/22/2009 4:12:00 PM
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haha i like it. strong words that any real pencil writing author can relate to. love always ~Jen~
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