Pencil

Pencil

 Into a tunnel
 A twist and a turn
 A point appears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Maryam this short poem made me smile - Thanks for the memory - God Bless, MJ
Gass Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:31 PM
Ths is a great poem, Maryam and Chris descrbied it perfectly. Great job!, Love, Robin
Higgins Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:21 PM
I love this..you made a sharpener a force in this poem. Brilliant!
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 6:01 PM
So clever! Those are the little things we take for granted! Nice one!~ Carrie
H. Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 4:12 PM
haha i like it. strong words that any real pencil writing author can relate to. love always ~Jen~
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