Penance of Eclipse

A slumped of sleep knee deep covenant breath of token, 
Dark horse past that of a crown with holds such stories, 
Is ice heavy or is it when chipping of the pressure that unlocks the dripping of a well, 
If stream is it hollow or cruise to depth of the night. 



For a night of a day does trail form by the lake, 
How intense is the rapid or current is one different from the other, 
Pressure of depth hurl of curl to the wind that keys the ideal of warn of the, 
Night how to captive is to know of every morning of wake.


Youth and up most respected characteristic the tarn of the setting, 
If stream moving connotation keeper of light is way is north star, 
When travel do one knows or captive the venture, 
Is one on a journey or a quest why not pick one to hold dear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 1:29 PM
ohh, this is a deep, thought-provoking piece,loius... thanks for your valuable comment!..huggs
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