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22/7/2026

Written by me on 9th December 2019 

Pen to Paper (Tanka Suite)

Writing is my world
of silence within my mind
otherwise unseen
allowing freedom of thoughts
when written down are exposed

Seeing words appear
as my pen touches paper
while new thoughts arise
thrills my sense of adventure
my muse smiles, my hand obeys
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Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 8:26 PM
For me the second one is the best and all you really need. I say this because I am not sure she wanted more than one tanka to be submitted. (If I got that right!) Loved how you said what you did in tanka number 2
Watts Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 2:02 AM
Hi Andrea Thank you and yes probably only one needed Never mind I tried lol Cheers Chris
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