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Pen Meet Paper

What in the ink whorl is papièr churl going on? Ill quill vapors are trying to victimize me, vex prose don’t belong Word saber player haters trying to stick it to me, throwing cursive stones Their coarse paper tone is so digital angry Blog blots got their writes all wrong Sore spots ... ink stains Rotted crease stroke brains always wanna bring paper cut pain Plenty briquettes blurt-y wanna dance dirty, a-many ugly exchanges ain’t squid spit purty If coal paper meet a diamond pen, Crush Groove is gonna tango win Counterfeit clone muse using plagiarist, copy printer tools Blank scroll troll fools didn’t learn Poetry Slam old school Any lip ink unwell with a lying spiel, gets the clean-up Truth erasure deal Epithet tongues liquor epitaph envelopes, gin up troublesome, scarlet letter tropes But when this Iron Will pen meet their forged paper Pallbearer finger caper gonna press an eulogy send Writ smack weakies think they’re grit summon strong!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2019 8:57:00 PM

very cool imagery you use here, Freddie!! So creative. love the paper cut line!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/27/2019 6:56:00 AM

Challenging, inspiring, provoking dear, Freddie!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2019 3:00:00 AM

Awesome poetry, love the strength of the rhythm..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/26/2019 10:14:00 PM

Best rap poem of 2019, my friend. Whoa! Does this one ever rock!! Temperature's rising! Wow! Bam! Love and Joy, Gershon

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/26/2019 10:28:00 AM

Freddie, Vijay & SoS comments said it so well. From start to finish, a smack upside the head with your words. You never fail to motivate the spirit in your emotive writes. I hope you keep the spirit into a brand new year. -Richard

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/26/2019 8:46:00 AM

With a powerful pen like yours Freddie, your iron will always be triumphant. I felt the intensity of your write throughout in superb lines like:If coal paper meet a diamond pen,Crush Groove is gonna tango win..and ..Any lip ink unwell with a lying spiel, gets the clean-up Truth erasure deal. Excellent response you wrote.

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 6:00:00 AM

Well it seems you hold the power to defeat them my friend... you have an amazing vocabulary and that first stanza reminds me of the one liner i wrote.. never let the block defeat you.. its all about patience..