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Pen and Ink

long and rigid
in hand
strokes command
plunging in
fluid spills
creation begins



*inspired

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Ayesha Karim

Date: 8/31/2013 8:48:00 PM

I like those last two lines a lot. Creation does begin when you put pen or ink to paper and you summed that up nicely! Well by creation you mean writing down ideas.

Lori Hopkins
Date: 9/3/2013 6:00:00 PM

thank you Ayesha~ as the reader, creation can be whatever you make it!! ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2013 2:30:00 PM

wow! Love it.. I have a poem called.... Of Ink.. wait a minute.. I think you read my poem already... Well Lori, it has been fun reading the ink you spill... glad someone inspired this short verse.. it is awesome... I will add this little gem on my favorite poem list....luv~ Linda

Lori Hopkins
Date: 9/3/2013 6:01:00 PM

thank you Linda!