Pen and Ink

long and rigid
in hand
strokes command
plunging in
fluid spills
creation begins



*inspired
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Karim Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:48 PM
I like those last two lines a lot. Creation does begin when you put pen or ink to paper and you summed that up nicely! Well by creation you mean writing down ideas.
Hopkins Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:00 PM
thank you Ayesha~ as the reader, creation can be whatever you make it!! ~
A   Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 2:30 PM
wow! Love it.. I have a poem called.... Of Ink.. wait a minute.. I think you read my poem already... Well Lori, it has been fun reading the ink you spill... glad someone inspired this short verse.. it is awesome... I will add this little gem on my favorite poem list....luv~ Linda
Hopkins Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:01 PM
thank you Linda!
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