Pen

Pen
supreme power 
of peace and war

Pen
Living agent 
of knowledge

Pen
True scale 
of past

Pen
True light of eye
By this if we disclose 
our own harem


-October 26, 2018 Chattogram

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/28/2018 12:17:00 PM

I'm with Deepak...(See below)...Here's a related axiom: "Life and death are in the power of the tongue." (Substitute 'pen' for 'tongue,' and there you have it!) Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/28/2018 7:02:00 AM

I like the "supreme power of peace and war" and it is true in more than one way.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/26/2018 1:12:00 PM

Hi Mahjab, The pen has been the source of envy throughout the ages. Well done, good write. Kind regards, Jennifer.

Deepak Srivastava

Date: 10/26/2018 6:09:00 AM

rightly said. "pen is mightier than the sword" thoughtful composition.