Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Free verse

Pelvis Impersonator

the bottom of the hour 
                                 glass is passed
                                        for a
                                  dented  flask
                            that  still  holds sway 







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Silent One September 29, 2019 at 3:48 PM you always make me think... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 30, 2019 at 10:16 AM goody <3

Sandra Adams September 27, 2019 at 10:29 PM your title made me think of elvis and his pelvis right away...loved the content ...you lured me in and delivered...great penning :) hugs Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 28, 2019 at 7:54 AM Aw thank you so much Sandra! My pelvis is wiggling with glee. My aching pelvis was my muse, scribbled in the dark, the next day I remembered and posted on a lark (when I thought of the title ;) xomo!

Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2019 at 2:29 AM This is almost a shape poem too! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 28, 2019 at 7:45 AM I had it as a shape, but exactly that, it's "almost" a shape, but more too ;), or less lol

Winged Warrior September 26, 2019 at 8:20 AM Why! thank you, thank you very much... a great analogy Mo...^WW^ :o) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 28, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thank you WW! Wasn't sure anyone would be amused but me ;) Hugs! xomo

Jeff Connelly September 24, 2019 at 6:08 PM Has Elvis left the building??? Even the shape of this hourglass poem works wonderfully with your words Maureen. Shake Rattle and Roll goid lady!!! Jeff Connelly September 24, 2019 at 8:55 PM I just wrote one thanks to you Maureen. HUGS!!! Jeff Connelly September 24, 2019 at 8:35 PM Hmmmm an inspirational pelvis? I know exactly where you're coming from Maureen lol. (Elvis the pelvis) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 24, 2019 at 6:20 PM Hah! I was hoping someone would say that. Awesome. My pelvis was my muse last night, soi went with it. ;), thank you!