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Pelvis Impersonator

the bottom of the hour glass is passed for a dented flask that still holds sway ***

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Silent One

Date: 9/29/2019 3:48:00 PM

you always make me think...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/30/2019 10:16:00 AM

goody <3

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/27/2019 10:29:00 PM

your title made me think of elvis and his pelvis right away...loved the content ...you lured me in and delivered...great penning :) hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/28/2019 7:54:00 AM

Aw thank you so much Sandra! My pelvis is wiggling with glee. My aching pelvis was my muse, scribbled in the dark, the next day I remembered and posted on a lark (when I thought of the title ;) xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2019 2:29:00 AM

This is almost a shape poem too!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/28/2019 7:45:00 AM

I had it as a shape, but exactly that, it's "almost" a shape, but more too ;), or less lol

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/26/2019 8:20:00 AM

Why! thank you, thank you very much... a great analogy Mo...^WW^ :o)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/28/2019 7:42:00 AM

Thank you WW! Wasn't sure anyone would be amused but me ;) Hugs! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/24/2019 6:08:00 PM

Has Elvis left the building??? Even the shape of this hourglass poem works wonderfully with your words Maureen. Shake Rattle and Roll goid lady!!!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/24/2019 8:55:00 PM

I just wrote one thanks to you Maureen. HUGS!!!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/24/2019 8:35:00 PM

Hmmmm an inspirational pelvis? I know exactly where you're coming from Maureen lol. (Elvis the pelvis)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/24/2019 6:20:00 PM

Hah! I was hoping someone would say that. Awesome. My pelvis was my muse last night, soi went with it. ;), thank you!