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Pellucid Skies

Vermilion accents infuse twilight As a menagerie of birds take flight Mockingbirds sing their song on the wing Rhythmic ripples, to the dusk they cling Hearts filled with emotions await love's luscious present as pellucid skies with starry intent Twinkle love's aroma as frangipani shrubs spread their scent Heavenly bodies, when their constellations permit, Traverse ancestral beliefs of Zeus's myth Flickering in the sky as messages they emit ~ 1-6-18

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Date: 1/12/2018 8:04:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Joseph on your lovely win with your fantastic write. ~Susan
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:01:00 PM
back with 'grats!! Wish I had more time. I am way behind in comments, so hopefully soon I can see if you have new ones I have not read yet!
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Date: 1/12/2018 1:49:00 AM
A lovely write Joseph.
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Date: 1/11/2018 7:46:00 PM
Back with well deserved Congratulations Joseph!!! So nicely penned! ~Judy
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:23:00 PM
Charming. Congrats on your win, Joseph.
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Date: 1/11/2018 3:41:00 PM
Congrats Joseph on your win.
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Date: 1/11/2018 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 2:50:00 PM
Great use of the ten words with some great lines and a great take on the contest Jospeh...
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Date: 1/9/2018 7:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful and serene write Joseph. Alluring content and scintillating imagery woven by you with ease from the inspiration of the required words. A fantastic write!! Best wishes for a win ~Susan
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Date: 1/9/2018 2:58:00 PM
so lovely, Joseph!! I finally did one too. Will post it sometime today. this was a very inspiring contest!
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Date: 1/7/2018 11:39:00 PM
Simply beautiful. Joseph, Happy New Year
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:21:00 AM
Hi Joseph, You did an amazing job with the 10 word 10 line challenge. Good content and good imagery. It makes sense . You nailed it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:27:00 PM
Beautifully penned Joseph! Best of luck in the contest! ~Judy
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Date: 1/6/2018 6:04:00 PM
Hello Joseph, I can see all the action in your poem as i am reading. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/6/2018 5:46:00 PM
Excellent poem Joseph. Very well written! :)
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:38:00 PM
You brought the skies to life Joseph.
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:17:00 PM
This is a lovely write for the contest, Joseph. Do so hope you are entering as it will be at the top of the list. Very beautiful!
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Date: 1/6/2018 11:46:00 AM
Well written, Joseph--lovely scenery from the skies.
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