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Peircing Silence, Screaming Thoughts...

Here in my room, I lay in my bed, With every thought of you, Intruding my head, Like snapshots in my brain, Of the last thing you said, My gut is violated, And I twitch with rage, I cannot free myself, From this anxiety ridden cage, And in this chapter of our life, It seems I can't turn the page, This torture is much worse, Since you have been away, I am so scared, That away is where you'll stay, And no matter how hard I try, I will have to lay here in my room, Alone one more day. By Mac Holmes. Janettas grandson. Written sitting in my room alone still waiting...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Date: 5/23/2016 6:48:00 AM
Epic and I love this one... the title pierced my attention...Linda
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:28:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/23/2009 11:19:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Janetta. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 6:39:00 AM
Very dramatic featured poem that you have written. Hope that it is a topic and not actual pain that you are experiencing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2009 2:58:00 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 11/22/2009 6:02:00 PM
The emotion and lonliness come through your words in a gripping way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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