Pegasus,Take Me There

Winged horse bright,star studded my dreams fly with you tonight light years beyond this starry sky Pegasus,take me there. Night sky a tinselled cloak, unveiling it on your wings a journey among twinkling stars nearer to God's home. ===========000=========== Contest:Pen a Pensee Sponsor:Nette Onclaud By:kash poet Date: 7th July 2012
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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Wow, Kash! A beautiful sky, you penned. Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:26 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Burch Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 2:52 PM
OOOHHH!!! Kash, I love this...it has to be a fav....Well Done....Big Congrats on your win...love ya, deb
Richards Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:58 AM
You took me home with this starlight beauty, dear Kash! Congratulations!
Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:35 AM
you hit me with this tender write, kashi buddy!.. congrats on your win in my contest!.. awwright!..:) huggs!
Beck Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 7:27 AM
lovely job, .......well done and congrats Kash....best wishes
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:03 AM
Smashing write Kash, Congratulations xx
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 5:05 AM
super congrats Kash luv on an exciting win for this marvelous write on my favorite horse Pegasus for Pensee.. always a shining piece my friend..
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Got to love a flying horse I saw Clash of the Titans and they did a great job with Pegasus. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:41 PM
You gave this poem wings, Kash!! Just a lovely poem for the contest!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 11:57 AM
wow, Kash, you took the theme and style of form and did a wonderful poem. I am impressed! For me it was a bit hard to do. I especially like that first stanza.
Ryerson Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Wow, this is REALLY well crafted...made me want to go visit the stars. Reads like a sure winner! - Tim
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Great work, Kash! Beautiful imagery in this. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim (putting this in my favs.)
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 4:33 PM
Great expressive and descriptive work...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
O'Leary Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Very nice imagery (as usual!).. Good luck in the contest... I'm sure you'll place at the top... Terry
St.Cross Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 12:51 PM
‡ Your Welcome Beautiful Kashie * Twas & Is A Joy, My Luv, Rachel ‡
Sivey Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 12:42 PM
What a fantastic write Kash! I really enjoyed your creativity you have penned here! You will do well in the contest my friend! Great Work!!
St.Cross Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 12:38 PM
‡ Enchanting In Fairytalistic Beauty * Love The Inspirations Tones As Also The Of Pegasus * Lovely, My Luv, Rachel ‡
Harrington Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Wow! Beautiful Kash! A winner for sure. :) Tanya
Wesley Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Beautiful Kash, the imagery is wonderful and I know this will be in the winner's circle!
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