Pegasus

star gaze a winged white horse flies across the northern sky lovers worldwide look in wonder just as Ptolemy did Jack Horne for Nette’s Pen a Pensee contest, 1st July

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/21/2012 9:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this romantic write,Jack!:)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet

Date: 7/20/2012 8:27:00 AM

Very nice Jack!Congrats on your win!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/18/2012 4:59:00 PM

Awesome and nice write,Jack...Congratulations on your superb win...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2012 4:23:00 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2012 8:51:00 AM

you romance the constellation so well, jack!..:) congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2012 5:12:00 AM

congrats Jack my friend on a fantastic write and win for this exciting horse in mythology luv..have not forgotten our collab luv.. waiting ..unless u have an idea now.. let me know please..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 5:51:00 AM

oh, heck, you make it look SO simple. And I was thinking of researching this stuff. DANG wish I'd have thought of this!!!

David Williams

Date: 7/2/2012 7:21:00 AM

Jack, now this I love, great imagery, good luck, might have a go at this contest..David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2012 12:29:00 PM

Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Soup Mail..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/1/2012 12:35:00 PM

Jack, My soup mail would not go through.I got that error 500 notice.. Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/1/2012 11:57:00 AM

Time and space and love, all in one poem, wonderful... Terry

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/1/2012 11:26:00 AM

Wow, Jack, this is a fabulous write, I really enjoyed the expressiveness of the stallion! I'm engrossed in the way you wrote this awesome poem! You have a definite talent my friend! I love reading your incredible poems whenever you post them! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2012 11:03:00 AM

Good morning Jack, I was wondering about you this morning... I'm glad for your comment... I'm still thinking on a new contest... about your verse.. you just described my curtains...lol... yes, i have them black-light Pegasus curtain. good luck in the contest...pd