Pegasus

star gaze
          a winged white horse
      flies across the northern sky
   lovers worldwide look in wonder
            just as Ptolemy did

Jack Horne for Nette’s Pen a Pensee contest,  1st July

romanceverse

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

July 21, 2012 at 9:31 AM

Congrats on your win with this romantic write,Jack!:)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet

July 20, 2012 at 8:27 AM

Very nice Jack!Congrats on your win!

Olusegun Arowolo

July 18, 2012 at 4:59 PM

Awesome and nice write,Jack...Congratulations on your superb win...

Sara Kendrick

July 18, 2012 at 4:23 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

July 18, 2012 at 8:51 AM

you romance the constellation so well, jack!..:) congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2012 at 5:34 AM

Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 18, 2012 at 5:12 AM

congrats Jack my friend on a fantastic write and win for this exciting horse in mythology luv..have not forgotten our collab luv.. waiting ..unless u have an idea now.. let me know please..

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2012 at 5:51 AM

oh, heck, you make it look SO simple. And I was thinking of researching this stuff. DANG wish I'd have thought of this!!!

David Williams

July 2, 2012 at 7:21 AM

Jack, now this I love, great imagery, good luck, might have a go at this contest..David

Sara Kendrick

July 1, 2012 at 12:29 PM

Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Soup Mail..Sara

Sara Kendrick

July 1, 2012 at 12:35 PM

Jack, My soup mail would not go through.I got that error 500 notice.. Sara

Terry O'Leary

July 1, 2012 at 11:57 AM

Time and space and love, all in one poem, wonderful... Terry

Russell Sivey

July 1, 2012 at 11:26 AM

Wow, Jack, this is a fabulous write, I really enjoyed the expressiveness of the stallion! I'm engrossed in the way you wrote this awesome poem! You have a definite talent my friend! I love reading your incredible poems whenever you post them! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

July 1, 2012 at 11:03 AM

Good morning Jack, I was wondering about you this morning... I'm glad for your comment... I'm still thinking on a new contest... about your verse.. you just described my curtains...lol... yes, i have them black-light Pegasus curtain. good luck in the contest...pd

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