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Peering In the Windows

Peering in the windows, Of those lives I barely see, Except when tokens are procured, For rides, intermittently, They look at me, I look back, Nothing severed or taken, My pith, unimpaired, And by them, unmistaken, Do they think that my life, Should be transformed to theirs, With foreign exclusions, And tainted, quaint stares, Their subtle indifference, No case dares to appeal, Embodies the essence, Of a world they call real, So they ask with green eyes, Should I now switch with you, Would that make my self-worth, Somehow, progressively true, I glance, to respond, That neither is needed, Because as tolerance failed, Manipulation succeeded, We both yearn to validate, Our courses of being, Amidst choices of learning, And preferred ways of seeing, For now, the windows are closed, The Santa Anas, they're blowing, And those lives which premiered, Have no interest in showing, We will then pause to wonder, If the sill might be locked, Therefore sealed from exposure, And no chance to be mocked. (12/30/01)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/6/2015 2:12:00 AM
G'day Subby... after reading an explanation amongst the comments I read your poem for the second time and I can easily see where you're coming from - thank you Subby - Lindsay
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Suburban Lovechild
Date: 7/11/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thx Lindsay (sorry for the typo), I appreciate the feedback. Every life is equal in value and experience, some folks haven't figured that out yet.
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Date: 7/11/2015 1:29:00 PM
Thx Laurie, I appreciate the feedback. Every life is equal in value and experience, some folks haven't figured that out yet.
Date: 6/23/2015 8:01:00 PM
Once again I am struck by your poetry, Subby. It demands a second read...and a third not because it hides, in fact it exposes deeper truths that one normally doesn't confront oneself with. A 7. :-)
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thx Kim, I'm humbled by your insights. I wrote this sitting in a NYC restaurant, observing people that appeared to be too proud and impressed with themselves, and this is what came out. Go figure.
Date: 6/12/2015 12:13:00 AM
You write deep! And sincere.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:33:00 PM
Is there any other way? lol I have my light moments too.

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