Peering In the Windows

Peering in the windows,
Of those lives I barely see,
Except when tokens are procured,
For rides, intermittently,
They look at me, I look back,
Nothing severed or taken,
My pith, unimpaired,
And by them, unmistaken,
Do they think that my life,
Should be transformed to theirs,
With foreign exclusions,
And tainted, quaint stares,
Their subtle indifference,
No case dares to appeal,
Embodies the essence,
Of a world they call real,
So they ask with green eyes,
Should I now switch with you,
Would that make my self-worth,
Somehow, progressively true,
I glance, to respond,
That neither is needed,
Because as tolerance failed,
Manipulation succeeded,
We both yearn to validate,
Our courses of being,
Amidst choices of learning,
And preferred ways of seeing,
For now, the windows are closed,
The Santa Anas, they're blowing,
And those lives which premiered,
Have no interest in showing,
We will then pause to wonder,
If the sill might be locked,
Therefore sealed from exposure,
And no chance to be mocked.

(12/30/01)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 2:12 AM
G'day Subby... after reading an explanation amongst the comments I read your poem for the second time and I can easily see where you're coming from - thank you Subby - Lindsay
Lovechild Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Thx Lindsay (sorry for the typo), I appreciate the feedback. Every life is equal in value and experience, some folks haven't figured that out yet.
Lovechild Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Thx Laurie, I appreciate the feedback. Every life is equal in value and experience, some folks haven't figured that out yet.
Nunez Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Once again I am struck by your poetry, Subby. It demands a second read...and a third not because it hides, in fact it exposes deeper truths that one normally doesn't confront oneself with. A 7. :-)
Lovechild Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Thx Kim, I'm humbled by your insights. I wrote this sitting in a NYC restaurant, observing people that appeared to be too proud and impressed with themselves, and this is what came out. Go figure.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:13 AM
You write deep! And sincere.
Lovechild Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Is there any other way? lol I have my light moments too.
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