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Shy sun is playing peek a boo as she hides behind the blushing moon MONOKU: "PICK A PICTURE WHAT CHA' SEE" Contest Image 3 chosen Sponsored by James Edward Lee Sr 17-syllables checked with how many syllables 4/3/18

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2018 5:06:00 PM

Congrats on your GREAT win, Jan. I was happy to see so many winners!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/21/2018 3:20:00 PM

Your eclipse monoku is poetically presented, Jan! Congratulations on your top placement! Hugs // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2018 9:45:00 AM

Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2018 6:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2018 7:11:00 AM

Thanks so much Anne:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/21/2018 12:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2018 3:29:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2018 11:36:00 PM

Lovely, Jan. Congrats on your well deserved win. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2018 3:28:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/8/2018 12:06:00 PM

Blushing moon ....perfect Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2018 3:28:00 AM

Thanks Flo:-) hugs Jan xx

Marc Acrich

Date: 4/6/2018 3:36:00 PM

No wonder you like my poems We write aloke Im a bit of story teller like you Only difernce is you understnd differnt kind of poetry Me i only do prose I have a few long stories in poem form and at one time i did weite stries they are there In anotjer section callled stries some are a crack up Im glad i fially made the effort to tead your cool poetry

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Marc, I guess I do tell a story in some of my poems but I've never written a short story and i don't think I've written prose:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 4/6/2018 7:02:00 AM

I got as far as downloading the photo, then went blank. This is a winner for sure Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 7:08:00 AM

Thanks Jean, I'm sure you will come up with something just give your muse a little time:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2018 7:23:00 PM

CUTE!! I clicked on that picture and found out it was the first total eclipse of blue moon like for over a hundred years!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2018 12:51:00 PM

The pic is awesome for inspiration Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/4/2018 1:46:00 PM

- Lovely and sweet, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 4/4/2018 12:15:00 PM

Brilliant Jan, love this monoku, good luck in contest. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2018 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Roy:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2018 8:32:00 AM

Wow!you nailed it. Should I say congrats now?

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2018 8:40:00 AM

Aww thanks Rick, I reserve judgement on any contest place these days lol a win is a bonus and means the poem gets a little more exposure:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 10:53:00 PM

Fun one-liner, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/4/2018 4:47:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx