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Pebbles On a Shore

like pebbles on a shore you surface me- quench with tides of thirst



Monoku 1: Your Best Contest
Silent One
December 22, 2017

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January 2, 2018 at 8:14 PM

Congratulations Laura! Many thanks for sharing, and your support in 2017, have a great 2018, Mick! PS: Inspired: seaside pebbles... tides erode... sand their future... Thank you! :)

January 2, 2018 at 2:29 PM

Beautiful. Charming winner. Congrats, Laura.

December 28, 2017 at 4:30 AM

Beautiful imagery ... Congratulations ....

December 27, 2017 at 8:41 PM

nicely done, Laura, congratulations on your win. hugs eve

December 27, 2017 at 12:41 AM

Beautiful imagery Laura.

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:43 AM

thank you dear James :)-luloo

Subimal Sinha-Roy

December 26, 2017 at 11:59 PM

Congratulations, Laura on your great win.

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:43 AM

many thanks dear Subimal :)-luloo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 10:16 PM

Back with congratulations! Hugs :)

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:42 AM

thanks once again dear Maureen :) -luloo

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:32 PM

wow, I love that "surface me" part. Very creative, Laura! The imagery is just wonderful. Congrats on your win.

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:42 AM

thank you lovely Andrea :) -luloo

December 26, 2017 at 7:31 PM

Returning with congratulations Laura for your top win with this gorgeous monoku.. ~Susan

December 27, 2017 at 9:33 AM

Lol! I've done that too, Laura :))

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:42 AM

ooops, I meant sweeeeeet Susan! :)

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:41 AM

aww thanks sweet Maureen! Be blessed :) -luloo

December 26, 2017 at 6:23 PM

Just beautiful !!! Congratulations on your top win!!

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:41 AM

thank you dear Judith! :)-luloo

December 26, 2017 at 4:04 PM

Dramatically lovely, Luloo! Congrats. Janice

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:41 AM

many thanks sweet Janis :) -luloo

December 26, 2017 at 3:55 PM

Yes Ma'am! You nailed it. Congratulations of this excellent win!

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:41 AM

thank you so much Curtis :)-luloo

December 26, 2017 at 3:02 PM

Congratulations Laura, well done...

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:40 AM

many thanks sweet Charlie :)-luloo

December 26, 2017 at 2:55 PM

I love the image created and the meaning behind it, Laura. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:40 AM

thank you so much dear Paul :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2017 at 2:53 PM

- A wonderful picture, Laura - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:40 AM

many thanks sweet lady :)-luloo

December 26, 2017 at 1:26 PM

This is so deep and philosophical, my wisdom must be wearing off on you.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Lulloo..

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:40 AM

umm... I meant day....haha

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:39 AM

lol, guess so! hehehe--- thank you so much! I love all your contests :) Have a blessed dat dear Silent One -lullooo

December 23, 2017 at 12:05 PM

This is packed with potent meaning..well written..best for a win Laura.

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:39 AM

thank you so much Vijay! :)-luloo

December 22, 2017 at 12:21 PM

Laura, beautifully expressed emotions with lovely evocative imagery. Best wishes..

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:38 AM

many thanks sweeet Susan :) -luloo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 22, 2017 at 10:34 AM

Gorgeous :) my best to you Luloo! <3

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:38 AM

aww thanks lovely Maureen : )-luloo

December 22, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Reads like a lovely pulling of the tide.

Beautiful Scars

December 27, 2017 at 2:38 AM

thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo

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