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Pebbles On a Shore

like pebbles on a shore you surface me- quench with tides of thirst Monoku 1: Your Best Contest Silent One December 22, 2017

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Mick Talbot

Date: 1/2/2018 8:14:00 PM

Congratulations Laura! Many thanks for sharing, and your support in 2017, have a great 2018, Mick! PS: Inspired: seaside pebbles... tides erode... sand their future... Thank you! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful. Charming winner. Congrats, Laura.

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 4:30:00 AM

Beautiful imagery ... Congratulations ....

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2017 8:41:00 PM

nicely done, Laura, congratulations on your win. hugs eve

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 12:41:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:43:00 AM

thank you dear James :)-luloo

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 12/26/2017 11:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Laura on your great win.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:43:00 AM

many thanks dear Subimal :)-luloo

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/26/2017 10:16:00 PM

Back with congratulations! Hugs :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:42:00 AM

thanks once again dear Maureen :) -luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:32:00 PM

wow, I love that "surface me" part. Very creative, Laura! The imagery is just wonderful. Congrats on your win.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:42:00 AM

thank you lovely Andrea :) -luloo

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 7:31:00 PM

Returning with congratulations Laura for your top win with this gorgeous monoku.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/27/2017 9:33:00 AM

Lol! I've done that too, Laura :))

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:42:00 AM

ooops, I meant sweeeeeet Susan! :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:41:00 AM

aww thanks sweet Maureen! Be blessed :) -luloo

Judith S

Date: 12/26/2017 6:23:00 PM

Just beautiful !!! Congratulations on your top win!!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:41:00 AM

thank you dear Judith! :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2017 4:04:00 PM

Dramatically lovely, Luloo! Congrats. Janice

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:41:00 AM

many thanks sweet Janis :) -luloo

Curtis Moorman

Date: 12/26/2017 3:55:00 PM

Yes Ma'am! You nailed it. Congratulations of this excellent win!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:41:00 AM

thank you so much Curtis :)-luloo

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/26/2017 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations Laura, well done...

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:40:00 AM

many thanks sweet Charlie :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 12/26/2017 2:55:00 PM

I love the image created and the meaning behind it, Laura. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:40:00 AM

thank you so much dear Paul :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:53:00 PM

- A wonderful picture, Laura - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:40:00 AM

many thanks sweet lady :)-luloo

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 1:26:00 PM

This is so deep and philosophical, my wisdom must be wearing off on you.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Lulloo..

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:40:00 AM

umm... I meant day....haha

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:39:00 AM

lol, guess so! hehehe--- thank you so much! I love all your contests :) Have a blessed dat dear Silent One -lullooo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/23/2017 12:05:00 PM

This is packed with potent meaning..well written..best for a win Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:39:00 AM

thank you so much Vijay! :)-luloo

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/22/2017 12:21:00 PM

Laura, beautifully expressed emotions with lovely evocative imagery. Best wishes..

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:38:00 AM

many thanks sweeet Susan :) -luloo

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/22/2017 10:34:00 AM

Gorgeous :) my best to you Luloo! <3

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:38:00 AM

aww thanks lovely Maureen : )-luloo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/22/2017 7:22:00 AM

Reads like a lovely pulling of the tide.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/27/2017 2:38:00 AM

thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo