Pebbles

Pebbles tossed in the pond...form ripples like thoughts of love that drift away

2/16/23
Contest A Ripple to me
sponsor JCB BRUL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:27 PM
so thoughtful this is. Congrats here.
Alex Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 9:02 PM
"like thoughts of love" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Frederic, so lovely and sad. A beautiful description of a love that didn't last. Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:24 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest -
Kauffman Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your win Frederic with this poetic delight. Blessings!
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