Pearly Braid

Melting cloud sprinkles pearls on you,
shines the black braid with heavenly hue.

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March 2, 2023
Syllable count : 8/9 (HMS)
Contest : A New Crystalline - Any Theme
Sponsored by : Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 3:32 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one. Congratulations. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:37 PM
Thank you, Sara for your nice comment.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 5:30 AM
- Beautifully written, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:36 PM
Thank you, SS.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Interesting! Congratulations!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 10:11 PM
Sparkling! Thank you.
Kitchin Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 1:45 PM
Subimal, a beautiful crystalline, congratulations on your winning placement!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Tania for the placement.
Daniel Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 11:35 PM
This is absolutely brilliant, Subimal:)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Thank you, Jo for your visit and for your comment.
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