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Pearlescent Pleasure

You whispered those words that made my heart silently shiver While my soul steadily began to quiver Wishing for a warm night that would last forever In realms where sun and moon will be cosmically together The romance that floats beneath oceans carrying diamond treasure And Scars of moonbeams will be veiled behind pearlescent pleasure

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2024 11:53:00 AM

this is my favorite line: In realms where sun and moon will be cosmically together . (I wrote a poem once how moon and sun are lovers that can never meet each other. In your poem they could pursue their affair!)

Tom Woody

Date: 2/11/2024 1:59:00 PM

Gotta love a romance that has pearlescent pleasure as its foundation

Paul Bell

Date: 2/11/2024 2:14:00 AM

I'm thinking this was a great night. Making pearlescent my word of the week now.

Aurore Severo

Date: 1/30/2024 12:10:00 AM

One can feel this poem.

Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 1:58:00 PM

Gosh golly gee I sure can. Fosho

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/19/2024 5:04:00 PM

Your poem is a mesmerizing journey of hushed words, evoking a delicate shiver in the heart and a steady quiver in the soul. Your portrayal of a warm, everlasting night where the sun and moon unite cosmically is truly enchanting. The imagery of romance beneath oceans, cradling diamond treasures and veiling moonbeam scars behind pearlescent pleasure, paints a vivid picture of emotions. Thank you for this beautifully crafted poetic escape. I loved it, Daniel

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2024 11:33:00 AM

Lovely imagery and rhymes..

Tom Woody
Date: 2/11/2024 1:59:00 PM

Soooooo loverly

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 1/17/2024 7:09:00 AM

Aaaaaah how I love a piece poured from the brilliant heart of the dahlin aura <3<3 exquisite rhymes and even more exhilarating lines that flows absolutely effortlessly dahlin…. Whispered those words that made my heart silently shiver…. Mmmmmm soo drawn to the rush of the lover’s whispers!!! The romance that floats beneath oceans carrying diamond treasure.. the enchantment in that line is gorgeous aee… as always breathtaking piece<3

Ink Empress

Date: 1/17/2024 6:57:00 AM

You rhyme so well dont you dahlin, this made me feel so much and I absolutely love the cadence and emotions expressed here in such a lyrical manner: sometimes some do tend to make us feel all that, making us ache and long more: reminded me of my boo! “ In realms where sun and moon will be cosmically together The romance that floats beneath oceans carrying diamond treasure “ wow!!! When you write its never one to miss! Always a treasure a pearlescent pleasure reading you dahlinb pls share more