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Pearl of the Swirling Sea and Moon

Beyond the lens of understanding Transcendent to the haven of Oceans lies the perfect jewel In the abyss of blue depths This gem illuminates in Perfect roundness Of hard pallid ash Glazed with a Touch of Angels breath For its soft glow Of diffused silver swirls A radiant, ambient contrast As light to the darkest waters For the treasure seeker to uncover The epitome sister to the opaque moon November 22, 2019 Completely Your Choice (27) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/17/2020 6:25:00 AM
Evocative Lonna. Very beautiful. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/20/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Linda. Appreciate your reading!
Date: 10/16/2020 10:22:00 PM
Beautifully constructed, Lonna, my compliments for your righteous 1st Place win my friend, Aloha! William
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/20/2020 11:23:00 AM
Always a pleasure reading your commentary! Love and best wishes.
Date: 11/29/2019 12:00:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Lonna
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/29/2019 11:35:00 AM
Thanks again Gregory.............it was a fun write. Lonna
Date: 11/23/2019 7:06:00 AM
What an amazing selection of words to create such great imagery....this should do well in the contest..
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/23/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you for your comments. I so appreciate your kind attention. Lonna
Date: 11/23/2019 2:12:00 AM
Hi Lonna best of luck with this fine piece for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/23/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you kind friend! Lonna