Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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February 11, 2024
Placed 1st: Pearl of the Orient Poetry Contest by Jcb Brul

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Pearl of the Orient

Donning splendiferous landscapes stretching for miles,
A culture that aptly prides, in bold, welcoming smiles;
A thriving land of islands~ an archipelago evincing awe,
A resplendence of nature, an exclamation of hurrah.

Sandy beaches embrace realms of pristine coastline,
Harboring lush foliage, embodying sublimity divine,
Of marine life, corals, reveling warmth of idyllic clime,
Reminiscent of paradise, of placidity, stilled in time.

Fun loving, amiable, proud tradition extolling grace,
Quaint, yet modern, is the vibrant vibe of this place;
Of museums, antiques, art galleries, buzzing cafe,
Of hotels, casinos, of famed sunsets on Manila Bay.

Luzon, the Visayas, Mindanao~ gems of the blue sea,
Living in tranquility, projecting utter beauty and glee;
Islands of hospitality, homeland of a privileged few,
A magnificent portrait, upon sea-canvas nature drew.

Philippines~ an acclaimed, lauded, pearl of the Orient,
Rich in diverse culture, her allure citizens augment,
Pulsating rhythms of hearts and souls, worthy of praise;
A treasure preserved, revered since the ancient days.

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Beata Agustin February 26, 2024 at 12:46 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for this... I am a Filipina, and your poem made me very proud of my country. By the way, I hope you can come to the Philippines. God bless you.

Shane Thacker February 25, 2024 at 10:22 AM Very lovely, Vijay. Congratulations.

Bill Baker February 22, 2024 at 4:13 PM I enjoyed the mental trip you've taken us readers on to the "Pearl of the Orient", Vijay. Your imagery and descriptions made the trip seem real, up close and personal even. Thanks for the experience, my dear friend. Write On! Bill

Maria Williams February 18, 2024 at 2:07 AM The Philippines is a precious gem where diverse cultures and pulsating rhythms appeal to one and all. A treasure cherished since ancient times, I'm yet to visit there, but it sounds appealing. Good luck in the contest my dear friend Vijay....Hugs.

Silent One February 13, 2024 at 12:03 PM Great rhymes here and vivid imagery through out the poem, you included so much great things about the Philippines here... a lovely poem and I think JCB will love it..

Paula Goldsmith February 12, 2024 at 11:28 AM WOW!!! What a lovely write/great ending. I really enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Heidi Sands February 12, 2024 at 5:32 AM This sounds very fun. Reading this stirs up my longing to go there too. You have described this so well. :)

Victor Buhagiar February 12, 2024 at 3:54 AM I consulted my Philippine carer about the p[laces you mentioned. Made me wish I had enough strength to visit. A fabulous poem.

Brandy Nicole February 11, 2024 at 7:30 PM ' Reminiscent of paradise, a treasure preserved. ' I think this image describes the ' Philippines ' perfectly. Your thoughts are beyond breathtaking, Vijay. This is beautiful in every way. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sotto Poet February 11, 2024 at 3:26 PM Vijay, your eloquent composition possesses an abundance of informative content and captivating imagery. Your poetic homage to the Philippines, often referred to as the "Pearl Of The Orient," is a delightful masterpiece that exudes a distinctively crafted style. Your astute portrayal effectively encapsulates the very essence of this nation. Without a doubt, your entry stands as a formidable contender in the contest. May you be bestowed with the utmost success in this endeavor.

Mike Gentile February 11, 2024 at 7:10 AM Vijay, your poetic tribute to the "Pearl Of The Orient" is beautifully informative and just a pleasure to read, crafted in your unique style! Always brimmed with explosive imagery, your poetic prowess shines through here! Happy Sunday!!!

Ink Empress February 11, 2024 at 6:26 AM Awwn this flows so beautifully and in such a captivating manner dear vijay. I love the rhythmic cadence of your poem and how descriptive it is, from sandy beaches to welcoming smiles, what more could we want, your poem makes me want to visit Philippines even more. And i love the way youv written also “ Pulsating rhythms of hearts and souls, worthy of praise; A treasure preserved, revered since the ancient days.“ and i must say your poem here too is worth the praise and all the accolades plus fav

Hiya Sharma February 11, 2024 at 5:41 AM Oh my, this is a breathtaking poem, painting the beauty and elegance of Philippines, in such a gorgeous way! I'm in awe of your artistic wordplay and descriptions, which maintain a mellifluous tone whilst flowing with impeccable rhymes, as always. "Pulsating rhythms of hearts and souls, worthy of praise", "gems of the blue sea", "Sandy beaches embrace realms of pristine coastline" So many amazing lines here! Loved reading this. Sending many best wishes for the contest. This is a FAV, wowww :)