Pearl of Merry

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Between the trees tall figures Sisters hidden by perfect mirrors Behind shivering trees pale and drawn Shadows snicker at glories dawn Fairies draw near flickering sheer petal wings By quivering glimmer perfect mirrors swing A verdant sea of cushion ferns and bushes Admiring absolute spring beauty wishes A magical playful fairy Crowning grace Streaming lace Clustering ferns trace Gossamer wings case A shadow that goes in and out a pearl of merry 11/15/2016

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Paloma P

Date: 12/10/2016 5:26:00 PM

Fairy good, & magically delicious. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/16/2016 9:12:00 PM

Eve, I know someone in heaven that is now smiling and content to read such beautiful prose, as surely as I am smiling here on earth!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/16/2016 9:26:00 PM

Thank you :-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/16/2016 12:14:00 PM

simply magical , eve... you paint with hued words!..huggs

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/16/2016 8:09:00 AM

Hello Eve, This is a most wonderful rhyme write for sure. I agree with all of the comments below. On my end, I find your poem to be both magical and enchanting. And, the choice of images/imagery coupled with a compelling word picture speaks to the superb quality of this poem. It's a SEVEN/FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2016 12:21:00 AM

absolutely enchanting Eve! ... into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 11/15/2016 8:03:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Eve! A pearl of merry indeed!