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Pearl Dreams of Rare Love

Break these chains that bind holding in the deep ovens blazing a fire for love. Smiling midday moon dressed in a baby blue sky with sparsely scattered clouds dot. White mother of pearl their silver lining treasure held soft beautiful warm babe. In her finger beams a light touching inside thoughts sitting posed at three o’clock. The moon just pops out in kissing a golden sun white ivory pearls smiling. Within daylight thoughts sweetly I pray in sunlight shining warm all over you. Deep ocean salted with the bluest warmest waves luster smiles sunshine color. The magic tear drop forms the silver lining bright and cries for ivory pearls. Alchemic water wondrous most blue, dark and rare lies love in Salt of the Earth. Mermaids caress hope encouraging happiness makes all the more magical. Pearl chain links in place Neptune commands do it now with finest gold most smiling. Bathed best and brightest white ivory pearls ready for their concatenation. Neptune’s grandeur finds all sea creatures in awe now abounds pearl dreams of rare love. Pearl Dreams of Rare Love 14 linked all so precious from the ocean’s heart and soul. Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 16, 2014) (Terza Rima in Unrhymed Tercet poetic format)

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Date: 11/25/2014 2:54:00 PM
excellent. Very vivid :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 3:06:00 PM
thank you so kindly kc wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/19/2014 9:42:00 AM
so many beautiful lines here. :)!!! love it.. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 6:48:00 PM
thank you deeply olive for the truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear pal
Date: 11/17/2014 9:02:00 PM
Pearls dreams of rare love,this title sounds just delightful in my ears, Liam, my dear friend! I get this image in my head like Neptune is rising out of the sea and capturing with his hands this beautiful vision forever that you two wrote here. A most radiant and beautiful collaboration between you and Gary! Keep the ink flowing! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/18/2014 8:31:00 AM
truly wonderful comment dorian gary my old leprechaun buddy will be doing a reel spinning like myself around in circles smiling thank you so kindly pal we put a lot into this one
Date: 11/17/2014 5:54:00 PM
Again I salute this fantastic write. Just read and commented on it at Gary's poems listing. Liam it is smooth, inspiring and beautiful to read. You guys did a magnificent job and such teamwork is a marvel to read.. A super 7 and it deserves higher. Bravo Liam and Gary!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/18/2014 8:05:00 AM
robert dear pal truly super comment garry was a pleasure to work with a gent heartfelt thank you pal deeply appreciated

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