Pearl Dreams of Rare Love

Break these chains that bind
holding in the deep ovens
blazing a fire for love. 

Smiling midday moon
dressed in a baby blue sky
with sparsely scattered clouds dot.

White mother of pearl
their silver lining treasure
held soft beautiful warm babe.

In her finger beams 
a light touching inside thoughts
sitting posed at three o’clock.

The moon just pops out
in kissing a golden sun  
white ivory pearls smiling.

Within daylight thoughts 
sweetly I pray in sunlight
shining warm all over you. 

Deep ocean salted
with the bluest warmest waves
luster smiles sunshine color.

The magic tear drop
forms the silver lining bright
and cries for ivory pearls.

Alchemic water 
wondrous most blue, dark and rare
lies love in Salt of the Earth.

Mermaids caress hope
encouraging happiness
makes all the more magical.

Pearl chain links in place
Neptune commands do it now 
with finest gold most smiling.

Bathed best and brightest
white ivory pearls ready
for their concatenation.

Neptune’s grandeur finds
all sea creatures in awe now
abounds pearl dreams of rare love.

Pearl Dreams of Rare Love
14 linked all so precious
from the ocean’s heart and soul. 

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 16, 2014) 
(Terza Rima in Unrhymed Tercet poetic format)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/25/2014 2:54:00 PM
excellent. Very vivid :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 3:06:00 PM
thank you so kindly kc wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/19/2014 9:42:00 AM
so many beautiful lines here. :)!!! love it.. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 6:48:00 PM
thank you deeply olive for the truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear pal
Date: 11/17/2014 9:02:00 PM
Pearls dreams of rare love,this title sounds just delightful in my ears, Liam, my dear friend! I get this image in my head like Neptune is rising out of the sea and capturing with his hands this beautiful vision forever that you two wrote here. A most radiant and beautiful collaboration between you and Gary! Keep the ink flowing! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/18/2014 8:31:00 AM
truly wonderful comment dorian gary my old leprechaun buddy will be doing a reel spinning like myself around in circles smiling thank you so kindly pal we put a lot into this one
Date: 11/17/2014 5:54:00 PM
Again I salute this fantastic write. Just read and commented on it at Gary's poems listing. Liam it is smooth, inspiring and beautiful to read. You guys did a magnificent job and such teamwork is a marvel to read.. A super 7 and it deserves higher. Bravo Liam and Gary!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/18/2014 8:05:00 AM
robert dear pal truly super comment garry was a pleasure to work with a gent heartfelt thank you pal deeply appreciated
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