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Dark clouds encircled the majestic peaks Hovering, lingering, around the tips Hiding the summit above. Enshrouded in thick mist dark, like a mysterious enigma. Swirling and dancing to the winds refrain. Clearing for only a moment,you glimpse Casting your eyes on peaks that have stood centuries of time. 7/2/12

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Date: 7/8/2012 2:35:00 PM
If they could only speak...centuries of stories they must hold. Enjoyed your poem !!
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Date: 7/3/2012 9:10:00 PM
Phyllis, do CAnadians do anything when we are celebrating the 4th down here? It will be lovely to see you here reading next week!
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:41:00 PM
...soup mail! :)
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:24:00 PM
life your poetry,it will stand centuries of time,great write Phyllis
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:03:00 PM
how you create images forming the beauty of nature and feeling it amazes me, phyl... resplendent!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/3/2012 9:15:00 AM
Hidden, then visible, these monoliths are testament to the endurance of nature. We see them in all their glory when clouds and mists evaporate! Well done, Phyl!! Best wishes, Keith :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2012 2:46:00 PM
just home from holidays and while riding thru the Rockies this picture played in my mind.
Date: 7/3/2012 6:45:00 AM
This is an awesome nature poem for mountain peaks, Phyllis. I really love that last part!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2012 2:46:00 PM
holiday memories ha ha. Guess I was looking skyward.
Date: 7/2/2012 7:26:00 PM
Very good imagery in this poem Phyllis.Enjoyed the read.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/3/2012 2:46:00 PM
thanks Kash

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