October 19, 2023
Contest : Any Theme-5 Lines
Sponsored by : Joseph May
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Through troubled times I traveled far, lugging life with lanced dreams’ deep scar. Twilight tinged the mountain mystique, I couldn’t climb the attainment peak, failed life faded like shooting star.
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