Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Quintilla

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October 19, 2023

Contest : Any Theme-5 Lines

Sponsored by : Joseph May

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Peak Unclimbed

Through troubled times I traveled far, 
lugging life with lanced dreams’ deep scar.  
Twilight tinged the mountain mystique,
I couldn’t climb the attainment peak, 
failed life faded like shooting star.

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2023 at 1:04 PM - A lovely poem, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Subimal Sinha-Roy October 24, 2023 at 10:05 PM Many thanks, Anne-Lise.

Joseph May October 23, 2023 at 12:22 PM Congrats on your win Subimal, Very nicely penned Subimal Sinha-Roy October 24, 2023 at 10:05 PM Thank you, Joseph for the placement.