William Kelii Kekaula Poet Jueju

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Peacocks Patterned Purpose

*Image of Peacock Bird Colorful by Pixabay.

Peacocks Patterned Purpose

Oft they climb in greens and blues,
Ere fan their fringed spring timed hues,
Spread quills to reach their meant souls,
E'er sought plumes to win mates' views.

2020 March 09     
*1st Place*
Let the Pens Flow - Jueju
~~Jenish Somadas: Judged 2020 April 02

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Janice Canerdy April 4, 2020 at 8:37 AM So lovely! CONGRATS, William. Janice William Kelii Kekaula April 4, 2020 at 2:52 PM Many thanks, Janice, -- Aloha!~@wk

Jc Hawkens April 4, 2020 at 4:03 AM I love the vibrant, colorful imagery in your poem. Congratulations on your most deserved win in the contest. JC Hawkens William Kelii Kekaula April 4, 2020 at 4:12 AM I am grateful for your wonderful share, JC, -- Aloha!~@wk

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2020 at 4:29 PM Big congratulations on your win with the peacock poem. Great idea for the contest you had> I could have sworn I commented to a poem you wrote with this same picture, but I do not see a comment of mine down here. Anyway, Woo hoo for a top placement (and thanks so much for my recent win in your last contest) William Kelii Kekaula April 2, 2020 at 4:46 PM It is welcoming to read your kind expressions, as always, Andrea, --and again, a heartfelt thanks in your participations of my contests -- Aloha!~@wk

CayCay Godwin April 2, 2020 at 4:26 PM Love your colorful peacock poem - beautifully worded imagery, William. Congrats on first place in the contest - way to go! Poetry hugs ... CayCay William Kelii Kekaula April 2, 2020 at 4:39 PM With my extended courtesies towards your thoughtful sharing, CayCay, much Aloha!~@wk

Anisha Dutta April 2, 2020 at 1:15 PM WOW! BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your wonderful poem associated with splendid Gif. Blessing always. William Kelii Kekaula April 2, 2020 at 1:25 PM I am grateful for your acknowledgments, Anisha, -- Aloha!~@wk

Krish Radhakrishna April 2, 2020 at 12:59 PM Congrats on your Beautiful description of this bird! The same bird brought me a win recently! Thanks for the image! William Kelii Kekaula April 2, 2020 at 1:36 PM I thank you for your thoughtful share, Krish, -- Aloha!~@wk

David Drowley April 2, 2020 at 12:32 PM Congratulations on your win! Excellent word picture. William Kelii Kekaula April 2, 2020 at 1:39 PM Many thanks indeed, David, -- Aloha!~@wk

Jenish Somadas April 2, 2020 at 11:02 AM Gorgeous poem like a peacock...Congrats on your wonderful win.. William Kelii Kekaula April 2, 2020 at 1:41 PM I am honorably pleased in my placement, Jenish, and a heartfelt thanks for your kind share -- Aloha!~@wk

Caren Krutsinger March 9, 2020 at 3:43 PM They are ever so gorgeous! Nice write. William Kelii Kekaula March 9, 2020 at 4:19 PM My thanks dear, Caren, -- Aloha!~@wk

Darlene De Beaulieu March 9, 2020 at 2:32 PM Hello William Kekaula, when those feather spread they are beautiful to be seen. Have a nice day my friend. Aloha! Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu March 9, 2020 at 5:39 PM Your welcome my friend.William Kekaula Aloha! Darlene xx William Kelii Kekaula March 9, 2020 at 3:13 PM I extend my heartfelt courtesies, Darlene, -- Aloha!~@wk

Jan Allison March 9, 2020 at 12:43 PM absolutely gorgeous William, the imagery is superb!:-) hugs jan xx William Kelii Kekaula March 9, 2020 at 3:14 PM I am appreciative for your thoughtful share, Jan, -- Aloha!~@wk