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ecstatic in rain lustrous plumes spreading like fan ~ dancer creative Notes: The peacock is the national bird of India. Only Indian peacocks have the famous flashy feather trains and vibrant blue and green plumage. Peacocks use their trains to attract mates – the bigger and prettier the train, the more likely a peacock is to attract a mate. The mating season coincides with the rainy season in India. April 13, 2022 Wild Animal Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com SECOND PLACE

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Date: 6/26/2022 12:38:00 PM
They do have quite a beautiful show :)
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Date: 6/26/2022 3:03:00 PM
Thank you. True, they love to show their shimmering fan!
Date: 4/20/2022 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. They love to dance. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..........
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Date: 6/26/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Your lovely comments are appreciated.
Date: 4/20/2022 8:16:00 AM
Dearest Mala, your graceful pen is a creative dancer moving across the poetic page creating beautiful and vibrant imagery. I adore peacocks and your wondrous haiku. How glorious it must be to see the male peacock with his shimmering fan prancing and dancing in the rain! The power and delight of your poem brings me there, my inspiring friend. Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/26/2022 3:01:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Peacocks are really beautiful and delightful birds with such a magnificent fan. Their dance in the rain evoke poetic inspiration. Your lovely comments are truly appreciated, Dear Susan. Love ~ Mala
Date: 4/19/2022 2:38:00 PM
It really has to be the most beautiful bird there is. Congrats on your win, Mala
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Date: 6/26/2022 2:57:00 PM
It really is a beautiful bird with that shimmering fan! Thank you.
Date: 4/18/2022 8:22:00 PM
Indeed, creative dancer. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/26/2022 2:55:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. Appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 4/18/2022 10:00:00 AM
Mala, wonderful choice for the contest and I loved learning about this uniquely beautiful bird! They really do seem to dance as like a fan dancer when they spread their tails and gracefully move! Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings dear friend!
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Date: 4/18/2022 10:04:00 AM
Dear Sam, Peacock is really a beautiful bird, and often inspiration to poets. I have seen them dancing in the rain - it's a spectacular sight!
Date: 4/18/2022 8:27:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!
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Date: 6/26/2022 2:54:00 PM
Thanks, Tania. I feel honoured.
Date: 4/15/2022 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful bird--beautiful poem---work of art!
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Date: 4/15/2022 5:14:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay. A dancing Peacock is truly a heavenly sight.
Date: 4/14/2022 9:36:00 PM
Peacocks are indeed such beautiful birds and you have rendered it its full beauty in this great haiku! Lovely image too ! Best of luck Mala !
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Date: 4/15/2022 5:12:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Valsa. True, a Peacock dancing in the rain with all those vibrant colours in its plumes, is a heavenly sight!
Date: 4/13/2022 5:58:00 PM
They are such splendid creatures, so majestically colorful Mala, outstanding poem, good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/13/2022 6:24:00 PM
Dear Rose, Thank you so much. True, they are majestic creatures, and they really dance in the rain.