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Peacefulness

One of the keys to happiness is mental quietness
a perceptive covering that operates on all fellness
And shall not incite one's heart pound emptiness
Start by being enthralled, then settle into stillness
Flee out of bed. Your feathers will hasten your brashness
We went on a quixotic to the darkest areas, tasteless
The springs rate boom as it grows the sturdy femaleness
The splendor of a full moon hung in the space darkness.
Out of bloom cherries are primed for neatness.
Ranches with lovely shades and surface wetness.
Orchards of lovely colors and textures, readiness.
Divine clean lips send heavenly voice pureness.
Delightful rapt echoes of a vivacious life sweetness

Written: May 21, 2021

Sponsored by: Brian Strand
ALL YOURS (Jun 12) Poetry Contest

Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2021

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Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2021 3:19:00 PM Lovely imagery and good advice, Lasaad ~ Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/24/2021 3:45:00 PM Thank you very much, Line. Your appreciation brings joy and delight, and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the scenes created here. Have a great evening.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/22/2021 6:41:00 PM Your imagery is breathtaking, while the poem itself leaves one with peaceful, quiet, joyous feelings. This is a truly wonderful poem, Lasaad. Kindest regards, Evelyn :) Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/24/2021 3:46:00 PM I appreciate your kind words, my dearest friend, Evelyn. Thank you so much for your visit. Blessings.

Alexis Y. Date: 5/22/2021 3:00:00 PM Hi Lasaad, Your photo compliments your positive and uplifting write very well. I agree with your overall message. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/22/2021 3:05:00 PM Thanks for your feedback and supporting words Alexis, I greatly appreciate it, have a blessed and safe weekend too.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/22/2021 9:01:00 AM Mental quietness. It is the last thing I have as I suffer from mild depression and moodiness. A colourful poem. Well done. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/22/2021 9:12:00 AM Thanks for your positive reading and comment, and I hope you're getting better quickly; I know that kind of discomfort is associated with emotional strife. God bless you, my dear friend, and fill your mind with peace and stillness.

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/21/2021 1:21:00 PM That certainly is the key to peacefulness Lasaad, Best of luck and enjoy your weekend Tom Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/21/2021 2:47:00 PM Much thanks for your great visit and comment, and it's is true; the key for quietness dwells inside our spirits; a debt of gratitude is for your stunning wishes, and have a favored end of the week, my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/21/2021 12:48:00 PM - That key is nice to own ... a wonderful poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/21/2021 2:40:00 PM That is true, the key of joy is inside ourselves, appreciate your visit Dear Anne-Lise, and much obliged for your desires

L Milton Hankins Date: 5/21/2021 12:38:00 PM Nice one, Lasaad. You spent a lot of time and energy on this poem, it is obvious. I love the pattern and the end rhymes. Very ingenuous. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/21/2021 2:37:00 PM Much thanks, Milton, and confirmed, I invested a ton of energy writing this poem; as you definitely know, the best things are cooked on cool fire, buddy. Like your caring words.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/21/2021 12:15:00 PM A profound poem that sheds light on the inner self. Very well written with powerful imagery. Wish you good luck, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings! Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/21/2021 12:22:00 PM Thank you very much, dearest friend Demetrios; your valuable comments are always embellishing my poem itself, blessing, and my very best regards to you