Notes About The Poem

Peacefulness

Two gems settle in your chest; love and sympathy.
Which prevents obstacles but not wisdom
Quietness contributes to the rise and serenity.
Times of jaunt and jubilation with no schism

Many crowns gaze away from the ground.
There are no swirls infused into the screen.
The tones soften as the deep-hued downed.
Feeling the slight shifts in his close keen.


Inept and vain ambitions utter to fade away. 
Aim to unleash the resources of practice 
Allow us to care for our stallion today 
Inviting our perceptions to beat in consonance.

He is again intensely in love with her.
Coupling in the early era of kid's ethics to give 
Then comes the discovery of one's genuine fear
The sense of what is precious to live

Tulips bloom, forming a hazy layer of clever
shine brightly with a light that is  fast and safe
as we get closer to our goal, a wave of pleasure 
Such a serene emotion and a pure spirit is not naif

Written MAY 10, 2021

Workshop: Inviting The Muse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jack Webster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Scorpio Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:09 AM
What a romantic introspection I found deep within your Ledger. Very nice going in my favorites list. Kindly A.S.
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May 12, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender in the contest. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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May 14, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Much obliged, for the kind words, dear Sara; it's continually inspiring to get your pleasant feedback// lasaad
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May 11, 2021 at 11:12 AM
A fantastic, well wrought poem, Lasaad. I wish you the best for the contest. :)
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn for your kind words and your wishes
Hankins Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:26 AM
A very lovely, well-written piece of work, Lasaad. I wish you well in the contest.
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May 11, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Thanks, dear friend; I appreciate your visit to my page and your encouraging words. have a great day, with my best regards
Trifiatis Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 3:22 AM
A gallant profound poem that deals with the achievement of peace in one's heart. Excellently done, dearest Lasaad. Wish you the best in the contest. Blessings.
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May 11, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thanks, dearest friend Demetrios, your visit to my page is really encouraging, have a great day and a peaceful mind
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May 10, 2021 at 10:54 PM
A treatise on peacefulness, but so hard to achieve with this war ridden planet. Lovely poem.
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May 11, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Thanks, dear friend Victor; I appreciate your visit to my page and your encouraging words. have a great day, with my best regards
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