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Peaceful Surrender

Dream on dreamer you are the father of the receiver.. or are you the lover of a giver mainly I'm making assumptions about you but clearly I'm taking sides to denounce you Rather than simply say I am what I am I am saying to you, that I can what I can Every little thing that I ponder makes moves and wonders and wanders the ocean floor depth upon shallow scores and scores mainly it is something glorified vector Lifeless Likeness upon a once surrendered.

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Book: Shattered Sighs