Peaceful Surrender
Dream on dreamer
you are the father of the receiver..
or are you the lover of a giver
mainly I'm making assumptions about you
but clearly I'm taking sides to denounce you
Rather than simply say I am what I am
I am saying to you, that I can what I can
Every little thing that I ponder
makes moves and wonders and wanders the ocean
floor depth upon shallow scores and scores
mainly it is something glorified
vector
Lifeless
Likeness upon a once surrendered.
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