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Peaceful Moments

Boiling gray clouds upon the horizon
Moisture dripping from lazy oak trees
Fog rising in the valley, rose clouds surprise and
A golden sun peeks through pines with ease

The dove upon the hill sings a sweet refrain
A gentle breeze covers me with damp
His presence and peace reach my spirit again
A few minutes upon the porch to praise and proclaim

Life so unpredictable but here seems same
Never know the hour or second of future change
The sun has reached above the trees aflame
Manmade sounds quieted, the doves coo in range

The solitude and peaceful moments so brief
Relived only deep within my spirit when seeking relief    
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Nicholsen Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 6:26 AM
this was so well written lovely piece
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 3:59 PM
Thank you, Yolanda. I appreciate the kind words. Sara
Magdalinos Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Hello Sara ,fantastic images...excellent Sonnet!! God bless you!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, Mulu. I am honored that you found it excellent. Sara
Deschler Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Yes, the world may change, but nature remains the same. And, it will always be there to comfort us no matter what tomorrow brings... I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem this afternoon, Sara. Keep up the wonderful writing!
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Kelly, The constant presence and assurance that nature gives is wonderful. I appreciate such a nice review of my work. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Great imagery. A poem to admire. Hugs.
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Victor. Amazing is your faithfulness. Sara
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