Peaceful Moments

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Boiling gray clouds upon the horizon Moisture dripping from lazy oak trees Fog rising in the valley, rose clouds surprise and A golden sun peeks through pines with ease The dove upon the hill sings a sweet refrain A gentle breeze covers me with damp His presence and peace reach my spirit again A few minutes upon the porch to praise and proclaim Life so unpredictable but here seems same Never know the hour or second of future change The sun has reached above the trees aflame Manmade sounds quieted, the doves coo in range The solitude and peaceful moments so brief Relived only deep within my spirit when seeking relief

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/25/2022 6:26:00 AM

this was so well written lovely piece

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/25/2022 3:59:00 PM

Thank you, Yolanda. I appreciate the kind words. Sara

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 8/13/2022 10:53:00 AM

Hello Sara ,fantastic images...excellent Sonnet!! God bless you!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2022 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, Mulu. I am honored that you found it excellent. Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/9/2022 10:41:00 AM

Yes, the world may change, but nature remains the same. And, it will always be there to comfort us no matter what tomorrow brings... I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem this afternoon, Sara. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2022 12:11:00 PM

Kelly, The constant presence and assurance that nature gives is wonderful. I appreciate such a nice review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/9/2022 8:18:00 AM

Great imagery. A poem to admire. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2022 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. Amazing is your faithfulness. Sara