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Peaceful Beginnings

With the first warm breeze,
Flowers wake stretching for food:
Reaching for the sun.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:00 AM

This reads so well, nice job on your haikus. You paint so vivid peaceful scenes.

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:07 AM

You are great at haiku's. Keep up the good work. DN

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:16 AM

Beautiful illustrated imagery.............Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 1:37 AM

Springtime is nice, Spring break was nice.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:26 PM

I love the imagery, beautifully done. Love E.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 10:53 PM

Nice illustration of life in this one. Tyler

Abe Lopez

March 23, 2009 at 3:28 PM

Niced title and haiku, you have a gift for these.

Jane Bowen

March 21, 2009 at 6:57 PM

BTW...Great Title for this~!!! Ciao, jane

Jane Bowen

March 21, 2009 at 6:57 PM

Lovely haiku...nature lover too eh? Great job reaching for the sun~ Perfect imagery friend....and thank you for your compliment on mine...nice of you to say. Always a friend at the soupie!~ Jane

Robin L. Gass

March 20, 2009 at 2:27 PM

Lovely Haiku, Raul! I love to see those flowers eaching for the sun! This is a perfect post on this first day of Spring! Love, Robin

March 20, 2009 at 1:04 PM

Nice use of personification for a creative poem. I can't wait for spring and the "warm breeze." Nice one! Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good day. Karen

Christopher Higgins

March 20, 2009 at 8:22 AM

Raul, you have written some really cool haiku of late..great imagery..keep up the good work brother.

Amy Swanson

March 20, 2009 at 7:17 AM

What beautiful images this conveys ;) almost like I can see smiling sunflowers reaching for the sky, with the warm wind gently blowing through their leaves. Such a pretty haiku! Love, Amy

Carrie Richards

March 20, 2009 at 6:38 AM

I love this image, that after a long winter's nap, they are ready to greet our spring day! I love this, Raul!! ~ love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

March 20, 2009 at 5:36 AM

Very beautiful. I can only imagine. It is snowing here this first day of Spring. Sigh. Love, Shar

Deirdre Omaidin

March 20, 2009 at 3:30 AM

I actually gasped when I read this. It is one of the best haiku's I have seen, a pure joy, good for the soul. Regards: Déirdre

Kristin Reynolds

March 20, 2009 at 1:54 AM

Beauitiful visual Raul. love, Kristin

Brian Strand

March 20, 2009 at 1:26 AM

An inspiring time Raul especially for the hailu poet.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Laurie Ginn

March 20, 2009 at 1:10 AM

Warm sun and flowers, can it get any better. Nice job Raul

Lena Townsend

March 19, 2009 at 11:09 PM

Simple truth worded perfectly. This is a really great Haiku pointing out the beauty and magic of nature that so many of us take for granted everyday. Very well done. Smiles from Lolita

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