Peaceful

The setting sun
glowed with amber
timbers
As it sank behind
the warm tidal
waters
It's silence
compared to the
timeless rhythm
Of the waves as they
lap relentlessly
upon shore
A soft rustle
lullabies you into a
 hypnotic trance
Only to be broken by
a sea gulls cry
Not a breeze stirs 
as peaceful silence
consumes
Invading the depth
of your soul.



6/2/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 12:06 AM
wowowow. you know what? this one could have been made to fit the form of pyramid poem that Nette challenged us to do in her last contest. Your theme would have fit that one perfectly!
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 12:11 PM
- Sounds really delicious ..... a beautiful and peaceful reading .... like the best dream .... Hope all is well with you dear Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:14 PM
A very nice poem . Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:18 PM
ahhh, beautiful, my friend. hope you're feeling well again and having a great weekend x
Gasun Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thank you so much for sharing a very peaceful and refreshing feeling through this splendid poem and very creative artwork of yours my very dear friend Phyllis. Thank you so much for sharing. Hope everything is doing well with you. Have a blessed day! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Sietesantos Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 9:25 PM
Thank you for sharing this beautiful and inspirational piece!
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