Wilma Neels Poet Free verse

'peace When Needed'

You know how we sometimes analyze too much and forget to feel? 

It’s okay to feel - 
whether it be confusion
pain
sadness 
anger 
or you just want to cry - 
even the strong ones like us get lost 

we don't always say what we really need, 
we hide behind the go between and supporter to everyone.. 

So tonight if you're lost 
know that in your silence you can still 
liaise with your Maker... 

He sees beyond what we ever imagined

most importantly He gives us the peace 
and guidance we sometimes seek in others...


©180720121420

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Fisayo Aderounmu July 22, 2012 at 1:50 PM It nice looking this up tonight i enjoyed it. Wilma thanks for kind comments on my poems. Shallom.

Jack Horne July 21, 2012 at 10:43 AM beautiful uplifting piece, Wilma. Have a great weekend, my friend lfde

Elizabeth Wesley July 20, 2012 at 3:14 PM Beautiful message Wilma, this hits home and reminds me we are not alone. Your faith is not hid under a bushel but shine brightly in this thoughtful verse. Luv, Elizabeth

Tim Ryerson July 19, 2012 at 5:29 PM Oh yes indeed, Wilma...this really hits home to me. Let go and feel the feeling no matter what it is then put it in the hands of the good Lord and He will take it from there...thanks for this one, my friend - Tim

Joseph May July 19, 2012 at 12:48 PM a very positive message Wilma... enjoyed the write...thanks for visiting....luv...Joseph

Matthew Anish July 19, 2012 at 12:39 PM Nice, pious work! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown July 19, 2012 at 10:22 AM Wilma, more wisdom. I love your words. The last two lines hit the point. We all need peace and love from God. Good!

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2012 at 10:57 PM wow, those last two lines are standout, Wilma. you are a talent for profound messages through poetry!!

Daver Austin July 18, 2012 at 3:12 PM Capetown. Wow! I feel cooler already. Good advice, Wilma. I agree. We shouldn't hold back the benign emotions. Love, daver

Russell Sivey July 18, 2012 at 12:05 PM This is a very beautiful piece Wilma! I really enjoyed the caring you placed into this write, all the power you put behind your words comes from a higher power! Very awesome poem! Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2012 at 10:01 AM you make me feel like a real woman, wilms... love the spiritual touch!... glow on!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2012 at 9:50 AM I just want to smile.....not cry....well written Wilma. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Elizabeth Wesley July 18, 2012 at 9:29 AM So nice to prowl in your poems while you are sleeping Wilma. Words of wisdom and truth I find and His peace is always the balm to ease confusion. Rest well my dear!