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Peace on Earth

Jittery frame could spill its viscera -
earth shouldered, light on the world,
a storm of stars and stripes.

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Paige Hind

November 24, 2025 at 4:59 PM

Gorgeous, actually took my breath away- different for the holidays

Kim Rodrigues

November 25, 2025 at 4:46 AM

Thank you, Paige! Glad you like this one!

Gershon Wolf

November 22, 2025 at 6:26 PM

Profound statement, Kim. Here's to its realization.

Kim Rodrigues

November 23, 2025 at 4:32 AM

Thank you! Hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

November 18, 2025 at 9:46 PM

Lovely Kim! I also love the image <3

Kim Rodrigues

November 19, 2025 at 4:17 AM

Thank you, Bj!

Valsa George

November 18, 2025 at 8:48 PM

Beautiful image and lovely Kimo. How I wish if the world had come together under one umbrella!

Kim Rodrigues

November 19, 2025 at 4:17 AM

Yes, for sure! Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

November 18, 2025 at 12:00 PM

Wish we had more peace on earth. Loved the imagery.

Kim Rodrigues

November 19, 2025 at 4:17 AM

Me too! One day when Christ returns! Hugs

Zyrool Gifford

November 18, 2025 at 10:18 AM

Hello Kim, beautifully written. A beautiful thing it would be to have Peace on Earth. Loved the umbrella.

Kim Rodrigues

November 18, 2025 at 10:25 AM

Thank you, Zyrool!

Sara Kendrick

November 18, 2025 at 9:21 AM

Definitely creative one. I like that umbrella. Thanks for sharing this one with us, Kim. It would be nice if an umbrella could cover the world and hold peace in for all to enjoy. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

November 18, 2025 at 10:24 AM

Truly! Thank you, Sara!