Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

- Peace of Mind -

Let the waves carry me to a new destination
  My mind needs peace - this is not an individual epidemic
  The feeling of a great urgency about things that must be done
  Thinking of all truth that I once held divine
  Deny the shadows of unnecessary deeds and words
  No matter how hard I try - silence finds me
  Silent tears in the desert dries out among small sand grains
  I can be in my own cosmos and let peace adopt my soul







  22.11.2014
  A-L Andresen :)
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Ewen A Morrison January 11, 2015 at 8:29 AM Sometimes Poetry speaks more than straight, normal text may express...this poem is wonderfully, expressively captivating - as a fan of poetry: I am fully and gratefully captured!, Ewen Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2015 at 11:20 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Ewen :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lewis Nyaga December 31, 2014 at 8:28 AM hello Anne... Peace of mind a verse.. i can identify with.. you have great poems... with time i.ll go through them all... for today am so drained.. happy new year **lewis Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 5:34 AM - Lewis, Happy New Year and thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne December 8, 2014 at 5:54 AM Brilliant! A Fav! Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2014 at 6:22 AM - Maurice, thanks for "fav", visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Carney November 29, 2014 at 8:29 AM Sorry forgot to rate poem. Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2014 at 11:45 AM Huggs :)

Thomas Carney November 29, 2014 at 8:27 AM Very descriptive words that define many, yet personal to the protagonist, who makes clear this is a crisis of many. Good work. I did get the feel you could have gone on with this, perhaps doubled up on it. Thomas Thomas Carney November 29, 2014 at 5:02 PM Cool Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2014 at 11:44 AM - Yeah, maybe Thomas .... but, I like short poems ... long poems - many readers lose focus :) - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton November 25, 2014 at 2:40 PM This is very unique and beautifully well written Anne Lise. I want to appologize for the other day, As an American girl in the literary world I sometimes am rude for I write in journalism, all kinds of creative work besides poetry. I have columns in newspapers. I am so sorry if I hurt your feelings. You are a very sweet female writer here. This is not just good poetry here that you have, it is excellent and this is your second language! You are gifted to do this. Take good care, Cindy Lu Thomas Carney November 29, 2014 at 5:04 PM El Estudio Es Spanol dos anos. I wish I stayed with Spanish. Know just enough to get by now. :) Cindy Cayton November 27, 2014 at 6:48 PM likewise.... Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2014 at 2:43 AM - No hurt feelings - We call this page "our soup family" ..... but, I can see the difference between true friends and not friends - even though English is my second language - Cindy, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami November 24, 2014 at 2:34 PM Great creation...Now you enjoy "Rhythm of Loneliness". Peace is dancing here...Best to you from............. Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:04 PM - Sandip, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak November 24, 2014 at 9:31 AM Peace of mind. Peace of soul. And peace in the world. Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 10:23 AM - Monterey, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 24, 2014 at 9:01 AM more wishes for peace, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 10:24 AM /// :)) huggs

Cynthia Ferguson November 24, 2014 at 8:36 AM that is a nice prayer for meditating :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 8:40 AM - Cynthia, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ankit Sampat November 24, 2014 at 4:13 AM Peace of mind! something that each soul desires. Good job Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 5:44 AM - Ankit, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem - Peace of Mind - :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 24, 2014 at 4:00 AM A supreme desire of the soul for in silence the inner voice is heard! Wonderful dear Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 5:43 AM - Demetrios, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso November 23, 2014 at 6:59 PM Hello Anne Lise, I actually read this poem this morning on my tablet, I came back here so I could comment on how lovely this poem is! What a joy to read poems such as this! Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:21 AM - Arthur, thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn November 23, 2014 at 6:15 PM Anne Lise, this is a very deep poem, it's so full of emotions thoughts of pondering, and sadness, well written my dearest friend, well written and expressed. love the waves part and the carry me to a new destination the best, it's very inspirational to me personally right now. Glad you enjoyed my star dust work I wrote it after I saw the first real snow fall of winter here, cheri Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:20 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem, dear Cherl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 23, 2014 at 4:46 PM Very emotive and expressive work..Peace is good for any mood of life..Thanks for dropping by..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:19 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem, dear Sara :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joel Thornton November 23, 2014 at 4:01 PM forgot to rate.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:18 AM :))

Joel Thornton November 23, 2014 at 4:00 PM masterfully constructed verses. Lucid Conveyance .. Bravo, a 7 indeed. I plan on returning and reading much more of your beautifully sculpted visions of artistic expression. Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:18 AM - Thanks for "7", visiting and comments on my poem, Joel :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 23, 2014 at 11:51 AM what a riveting, moving scene, anne..one of your best ever.. happy sunday with hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 1:17 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarai Virden November 23, 2014 at 11:42 AM Deeply touching from the first line. Simply beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 1:17 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem, Sarai :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 23, 2014 at 9:22 AM Without being in own cosmos, no rest is there. Beautifully done with a beautiful truth. 7 only 7. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 10:54 AM - My friend Bl, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus November 23, 2014 at 8:56 AM This is lovely and touching, Anne Lise! Life is too fast and complicated. From time to time we need to re-gather our thoughts and recuperate our physical and mental strength. There is nothing better than finding a quiet haven of silence and peace to do so. Have a lovely day. /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 10:53 AM - So true Paul :) - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll November 23, 2014 at 8:48 AM A most serene write Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 10:52 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem Ken :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode November 23, 2014 at 6:43 AM I wish my soul to be adopted by peace also,this is great Anne...huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 10:52 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem Kayod5 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ninette Carey November 23, 2014 at 5:10 AM Thank you!!! For your kind words!!! Uplifting my night!! It is nice to be welcomed to the poetysoup family. This is new to me. I have always been drawn to love of words.. A new beginning is refreshing .. Xo Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 5:41 AM - You are welcome, pleasure is on my side - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem Nina :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 23, 2014 at 12:50 AM Beautiful write Anne Lise! Loved the concluding line! Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 5:43 AM - Dr. Upma, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem - Peace of Mind - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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