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Kan være et bilde av blomst, natur og tre

(my photo : 17/07/2021)

- Peace of Mind -

Take a step up
                                   and one more
                                   The steps covered
                                   with sunshine
                                   Color on color ...
                                   flower by flower
                                   An orchestra
                                   of the bumblebees
                                   evocative cello music
                                   Take it one step further
                                   and you are closer
                                   heaven ... 
                                   No one is nailed
                                   to the ground



                                   17/07/2021
                                   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Krutsinger Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 4:45 AM
"no one is nailed to the ground" and yet, sometimes, we think we are nailed to a chair. Ha! Beautifully penned.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:37 PM
"No one is nailed/ to the ground" - I really love this verse, Anne-Lise - very sweet and soothing! Love and hugs ~ Mala
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 11:43 AM
I love this write with the "orchestra of the bumblebees." A sweet sound. The picture did no come up for me. Have a blessed day with hugs....................
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 11:23 AM
I find nature akin to heaven. Well penned friend.
Ball Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:37 PM
You can lock up the bird but it's spirit will forever fly free. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
Gentile Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 11:50 AM
I find inspiration in your beautiful words Anne-Lise. It is truly up to us to be happy! Your photo is stunning as well. Happy Sunday !!
Skelly Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Absolutely lovely, a fiesta of summer flowers...Delice
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 10:08 AM
absolutely delightful AnneLise, I adore the orchestra of bumblebees!:-( hugs Jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:06 AM
What an outstanding nature lover you are dear friend - 3 outstanding poems about nature, one after the other, bravo splendid poetry. Blessings and love Jennifer,.
Kannan Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Beautiful place and lovely poetry... Enjoyed reading it, Anne...
Mcconnell Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Lovely piece and title Anne-Lise, so effortlessly told bringing deep peace blessings and hugs,Gordon
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Gorgeous!
Bauer Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:51 AM
this is lovely, anne-lise! i especially like "an orchestra of the bumblebees..."
Rose  Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Ah, I love that last line, no one is nailed to the ground, when I read your poems I fly away from the ground closer to heaven, Much love, and smiles !
Leffanta Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Thanks for a piece of your mind!
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:09 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Rico :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:54 AM
Much harmony and peace in your words, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:58 AM
- Happy you enjoyed it Vijay, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Wonderful, Anne Lise! Pangie xx
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:57 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comments, Pangie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Your verse takes us to the gates of heaven Anne, I can see why you were inspired. Hope you're well and enjoying your weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:56 AM
- Many thanks, I appreciate your kind comment Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 8:22 AM
I could laze in such a place all day, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 8:33 AM
- Me too, Jenna ... thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Very nice , inspiring poem Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 8:03 AM
- A little poem that was born along a road today, Heidi ... glad you enjoyed it, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM
WoW! Anne-Lise Your positive and encouraging poem complemented your photo very well. I like it a lot. Have a wonderful day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 8:02 AM
- A beautiful garden I passed earlier today ... wish it was mine, many thanks for the lovely comments, Alexis :) - Have a wonderful weekend you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Retro Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 7:45 AM
That was very sweet. Thank you for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 7:59 AM
- Thanks for stopping by, Denise :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 6:48 AM
How true. Like you, I live from day to day. Have a lovely weekend and keep safe. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 7:58 AM
- Hi Victor, thank you very much for your comments :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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