Kash Poet Poet Senryu

Peace In My Embrace

I am busy now
but will come back in your mind....
sleepless nights await

wherever you go
I will sneak into your thoughts....
keep the pills ready

pills may bring you sleep
but can they give you the peace?....
peace in my embrace




© 2011 kashinath karmakar (2nd May 2011)

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Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2013 at 2:12 PM Nicely won, Kash. congrats. and how the heck are you? I miss our old chats. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2013 at 10:16 PM Kash, thank you for supporting my contest... Congratulations! love~ Linda

Matt Hunt May 11, 2011 at 2:43 PM Very good. Thank you so much for your congrats to me. That made my day:) R.M.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 3, 2011 at 12:54 PM Very romantic and loud invitation, kashinath

Wilma Neels May 3, 2011 at 12:43 PM I have to fav this one Kash, so not going to answer the question you posted in the end lol.. To answer your question about the rain we had loads of it for the last couple of days, can I send you a little via sm? ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 3, 2011 at 7:47 AM Another lovely piece to embrace your own words Kash as u mellow us by this read so romantic and sweet and charming to denote that no rest will come unless in your arms.. powerful and intense my friend.. luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown May 3, 2011 at 5:27 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Kashinath. I will be back again soon to read more. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud May 2, 2011 at 10:51 PM such dreamy depth, kashi... see you in my page and my contest! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2011 at 10:27 PM this is lovely, Kash. I like this kind of little poem from you!

Poet Destroyer A May 2, 2011 at 10:13 PM Kash, enjoyed,..p.d.

Diane Locksley May 2, 2011 at 8:08 PM I'll be waiting for you tonight Kash. This is a lovely poem. Best to you, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire May 2, 2011 at 8:06 PM Give it a try, Kash. John is a great judge of limericks. He's just looking for humor and the form is very easy if you look at the forms posted here. I want to see you give it a try. Will you do it for me and let me know when it's posted? Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire May 2, 2011 at 8:04 PM Pills can never take the place of a warm embrace from someone who loves you, Kash. Beautiful senryu. I didn't get good news today at the doctor, but thank you for your kind words. I think you should try writing a fishing limerick for John's contest. They're fun and the form is easy. Love and blessings to you, Carolyn

Kash Poet May 2, 2011 at 7:52 PM I know how to come back into your mind:)