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PEACE II

PEACE II


Oceans filled with tears
Shed by the angels weeping  
For souls fell in war  

Open hearts to love 
Making hate capitulate 
Let's give peace a chance



© Demetrios Trifiatis
     08 JUNE 2013


NOT FOR CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/20/2015 2:06:00 PM
Excellent pen Demetrios! I enjoyed reading your very beautiful haiku, my dear friend. Very nice thoughts! A 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 6/9/2013 10:56:00 AM
this is wonderful beautiful and deep...Linda
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/9/2013 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Linda, you so generous!
Date: 6/8/2013 10:47:00 PM
very nice. I think it would be good in that contest!!
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Date: 6/9/2013 1:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea!
Date: 6/8/2013 7:23:00 PM
Demetrios ..a wonderfully written tribute for peace..thank you..
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/9/2013 1:10:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Donna!
Date: 6/8/2013 4:16:00 AM
My beloved Demetrios, beautiful poem. But I only like the first stanza. Your opening line "Oceans filled with tears" is very compelling .Nice imagery and use of symbolism in this piece.
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Date: 6/8/2013 4:29:00 AM
Thank you my beloved one! I heard you and tried again!