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Peace Ii

PEACE II Oceans filled with tears Shed by the angels weeping For souls fell in war Open hearts to love Making hate capitulate Let's give peace a chance © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 JUNE 2013 NOT FOR CONTEST

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/20/2015 2:06:00 PM

Excellent pen Demetrios! I enjoyed reading your very beautiful haiku, my dear friend. Very nice thoughts! A 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 10:56:00 AM

this is wonderful beautiful and deep...Linda

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/9/2013 1:05:00 PM

Thank you Linda, you so generous!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2013 10:47:00 PM

very nice. I think it would be good in that contest!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/9/2013 1:10:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea!

Donna Jones

Date: 6/8/2013 7:23:00 PM

Demetrios ..a wonderfully written tribute for peace..thank you..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/9/2013 1:10:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment, Donna!

Christine Phillips

Date: 6/8/2013 4:16:00 AM

My beloved Demetrios, beautiful poem. But I only like the first stanza. Your opening line "Oceans filled with tears" is very compelling .Nice imagery and use of symbolism in this piece.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/8/2013 4:29:00 AM

Thank you my beloved one! I heard you and tried again!