Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Haiku

Peace Ii

PEACE II


Oceans filled with tears
Shed by the angels weeping  
For souls fell in war  

Open hearts to love 
Making hate capitulate 
Let's give peace a chance



© Demetrios Trifiatis
     08 JUNE 2013


NOT FOR CONTEST

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Dorian Petersen Potter February 20, 2015 at 2:06 PM Excellent pen Demetrios! I enjoyed reading your very beautiful haiku, my dear friend. Very nice thoughts! A 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2013 at 10:56 AM this is wonderful beautiful and deep...Linda Demetrios Trifiatis June 9, 2013 at 1:05 PM Thank you Linda, you so generous!

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2013 at 10:47 PM very nice. I think it would be good in that contest!! Demetrios Trifiatis June 9, 2013 at 1:10 AM Thank you very much Andrea!

Donna Jones June 8, 2013 at 7:23 PM Demetrios ..a wonderfully written tribute for peace..thank you.. Demetrios Trifiatis June 9, 2013 at 1:10 AM Thank you for your visit and comment, Donna!

Christine Phillips June 8, 2013 at 4:16 AM My beloved Demetrios, beautiful poem. But I only like the first stanza. Your opening line "Oceans filled with tears" is very compelling .Nice imagery and use of symbolism in this piece. Demetrios Trifiatis June 8, 2013 at 4:29 AM Thank you my beloved one! I heard you and tried again!