Peace Flutters

she becalms senses 
heart leaps sensing smell of love   
peace flutters sky high 


Dec. 1, 2021
Hi-ku (5) Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Brian Strand
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Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 12:05 PM
- A lovely haiku, Newton :) - Luck in the contest :) - Happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:47 PM
So very nice, the imagery and meaning of this!
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Horsman Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:35 PM
A winner for me, Newton. All the best for the New year. Harry
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so much Harry for this great complement!!
Edmonds  Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 7:34 PM
That’s a really lovey Haiku Newton, I like that - peace flutters, I image it fluttering on wings of love. Best wishes ~ Belle
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:53 AM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this impressively sweet comment!!
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