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Peace Be With You

Peace be with you
                 A lifetime
                   Always

           Sweet peacefulness
                May it soothe
                   Your soul

             In troubled times
                 Look to God
                   For peace

                May it linger
               In your heart
                    I pray



Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina (Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and posted: 10/15/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Edward, congratulations on your great win in this Senryu contest.. great inspirational verses
Ibeh Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 5:51 AM
Thank you very much, Eve!:-)
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:33 PM
so nicely done. Congrats on the awesome win.
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea!:-)
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Such a soothing string of poems:-) Many congratulations on your win Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Thank you very much, Jan!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Lovely, Edward. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
Ibeh Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Thank you, Line!:-) Much love...
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:30 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Edward :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!:-)
Messina Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Beautifully written, Edward. Short and simple but everything that needs to be said. Congratulations on your top win...Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Thank you very much for my placement, Charles!:-) I'm honored.
Mcguire Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:55 AM
And peace be with you to! Nice poem
Ibeh Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Thank you very much, Timothy!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Well done charlieku, Edward. Great theme.
Ibeh Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-)
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