Deneen White Poet Rhyme

Peace Be Still

peace like the river~

        waves of sea~

calls to the very heart of me~

       still of the night~

       calming my frights~

washes over me in the dead

        of the night~

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John Loving Iii September 5, 2008 at 7:50 AM it's a blessing that everyone doesn't have. john

Vince Suzadail Jr. September 4, 2008 at 6:40 PM A touch of serenity in this one. Vince

Michaela Payne September 3, 2008 at 7:35 AM wow this was so beautiful and peaceful, I felt like I was just floating while reading this, it was wonderful. Amazing write. Blessings ~Michaela~

James Foulk August 31, 2008 at 7:55 PM Loved this poem. it was so refreshing, and relaxing, liked the way it rolled along so smootly. thank you for reading my mickey in the sky and for your comment.

Sharon Winter August 29, 2008 at 8:19 AM I would love to feel this way. Almost like a chant. So peaceful. Beautiful write. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt August 29, 2008 at 4:57 AM This whole read has such a calming tranquil feel to it. Great effect and a marvelous write. Michael

Kristin Reynolds August 29, 2008 at 3:37 AM Peace is the place we all wish to be within, once that happenes peace will come to all...well done, love Kristin

Joseph Spence Sr August 29, 2008 at 1:43 AM This is excellent. I like your use of figurative language. The rhyming pattern also gives a spark to the poem. Great job! ~Joseph