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Peace and Tranquility

One day, I went for a forest walk feeling sad, there was a great heaviness in my heart; I could not even express why I felt so bad, but, I think my life was falling apart. Soon, I came upon a gentle slow flowing stream where a majestic old oak tree stood guard I looked at the old tree like I was in a dream oh, it seemed that a hundred birds- I heard The ancient tree seemed to be thousands of years old twisting gnarled branches were covered in moss it was humbling and beautiful to behold branches grew upwards and stretched wide across Some branches fell into the ground then grew again it was battle scarred from many a storm and gave me such strength I said a prayer, amen I lay beneath for hours and felt so warm There was a peace within me that was uplifting if this old oak tree can survive the years then, why can I not send my pain and grief drifting so, beneath this tree I let go of tears __________________________ May 2, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Peace and Tranquility Copyright Protected, ID 20-1248-208-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to Brian's Choice 1 sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 5/3/2020 10:13:00 AM
Constance, an allegoric poem which speaks to my heart. When feeling down, a walk through the forest can lift our spirits when we observe the wonders of its beauty and stamina to survive. ~ Sonia
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Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2020 5:54:00 PM
Sonia, thanks for the visit and for the great comment _Constance
Date: 5/3/2020 10:04:00 AM
Fabulous, delightful poem to wake up to this morning, Constance:-) Toasting to your win with this beauty!
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Date: 5/3/2020 5:55:00 PM
Edward, thanks for the visit and the fabulous _Constance
Date: 5/3/2020 2:19:00 AM
Oh, what a very uplifting poem. Your last stanza made my eyes welled up. Thank you for posting. I need this kind of gem these times. Very well-written. To my faves.
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Date: 5/3/2020 9:37:00 AM
JCB, thanks for visiting and for the compliment on my poem and the FAV _Constance
Date: 5/2/2020 2:56:00 PM
The character of trees is a humbling quality that I always find comfort in. Thanks for the wonderful reminder Constance...
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Date: 5/3/2020 9:38:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for the nice comment _Constance
Date: 5/2/2020 2:27:00 PM
And, in doing so, replenished the forest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/3/2020 9:38:00 AM
Rico, thanks for the visit and comment, appreciate _Constance

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