Peace and Tranquility

One day, I went for a forest walk feeling sad,
there was a great heaviness in my heart;
I could not even express why I felt so bad,
but, I think my life was falling apart.

Soon, I came upon a gentle slow flowing stream
where a majestic old oak tree stood guard
I looked at the old tree like I was in a dream
oh, it seemed that a hundred birds- I heard

The ancient tree seemed to be thousands of years old
twisting gnarled branches were covered in moss
it was humbling and beautiful to behold
branches grew upwards and stretched wide across

Some branches fell into the ground then grew again
it was battle scarred from many a storm
and gave me such strength I said a prayer, amen
I lay beneath for hours and felt so warm

There was a peace within me that was uplifting
if this old oak tree can survive the years
then, why can I not send my pain and grief drifting
so, beneath this tree I let go of tears

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May 2, 2020

Poetry/Rhyme/Peace and Tranquility
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All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

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Walker Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Constance, an allegoric poem which speaks to my heart. When feeling down, a walk through the forest can lift our spirits when we observe the wonders of its beauty and stamina to survive. ~ Sonia
La France Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Sonia, thanks for the visit and for the great comment _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Fabulous, delightful poem to wake up to this morning, Constance:-) Toasting to your win with this beauty!
La France Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Edward, thanks for the visit and the fabulous _Constance
Brul Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Oh, what a very uplifting poem. Your last stanza made my eyes welled up. Thank you for posting. I need this kind of gem these times. Very well-written. To my faves.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 9:37 AM
JCB, thanks for visiting and for the compliment on my poem and the FAV _Constance
Smith Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 2:56 PM
The character of trees is a humbling quality that I always find comfort in. Thanks for the wonderful reminder Constance...
La France Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Charlie, thanks for the nice comment _Constance
Leffanta Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 2:27 PM
And, in doing so, replenished the forest! Aloha! Rico
La France Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Rico, thanks for the visit and comment, appreciate _Constance
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