Simone Segal Poet I do not know?

Peace and Love

PEACE AND LOVE

Ouch to be the one to start confusion

In front of your eyes is just an illusion

These are not just words, nor only lyrics

Spiritual awareness lies in quantum physics

We followed a path unknowingly

With eyes wide open, yet could not see

What we believed was so untrue 

Effecting our psyche without a clue

Science will rewrite every page

An eternity taken to reach this age

The messiah is here you will find

And lies within your conscious mind

The truth is written in the words above

We can only survive with peace and love

It’s fear that causes atrocities and makes us weak

Clouding our vision, shutting out what we seek

When we can cure ourselves of fear

The essence of life becomes crystal clear

I do not ask that you believe, outrageous words you can’t conceive

Why listen to someone else? Find out the knowledge for yourself

Go take a look, I challenge you

And see if what I say rings home true!

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Debbie Guzzi July 16, 2010 at 9:20 AM I really liked and agree with this. I would call it COUPLET form and present it in 2 line groupings. Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico March 15, 2010 at 6:41 AM I like this alot!! Very good... and thank you for your lovely comments..Im in aww that people like wht I write.. Love Michael

Audrey Haick March 5, 2010 at 6:44 AM So much truth in here, Simone! Great job! And thank you for your kind comments on my poem....Peace, love, Audrey

John Freeman March 3, 2010 at 6:49 PM Good job here Simon, I am in agreement. Awesome Agape, brings Awesome peace with in what is sent around goes around, if man could only learn this truth. Agape, Moses

Jimmy Anderson February 22, 2010 at 1:16 PM Awesome write, simone! I'm commenting for Jimmy since he can't. He's doing faily good. Drop him a line sometime. .....Audrey for Jimmy

John Freeman February 19, 2010 at 6:22 PM When Love is perfected in us it casts out all fear, I have that on good authority, in God's word. Love is the source of all things. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Susan Palli February 19, 2010 at 2:51 AM enjoyed it thanks

Robert A. Dufresne February 18, 2010 at 6:18 PM You have alot of submits here that are interesting to think about Simone. Some is related to my simple little poem "Meditation" I believe, Fear is a dastardly foe to be sure but I think stops becoming one when an attitude is changed towards what it really is..then dealt with. Lots of material for thought, Simone. Enjoyed-Robert

Amy Thompson February 18, 2010 at 2:52 PM Dear Simone, thanks for your kind comment on my poem, “I Want a World.” Judging from your poem, “Peace and Love”, you are seeking a very similar world. Lovely poem. Let me know if you find it. ? Love, Amy.

David Byrne February 17, 2010 at 7:42 PM I like this line 'Find out the knowledge for yourself'

Carolyn Devonshire February 17, 2010 at 12:40 PM How true that love can "cure ourselves of fear." If we all learned to love fully and accepted each other's differences, we'd live in a more harmonious, peaceful world. Excellent message in this well composed poem, Simone! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser February 17, 2010 at 12:25 PM Terrific message from the Poet of Wisdom, you certainly rock at these writes Simone. I just love reading them and absorb what you write >> James

Derrick Burton February 17, 2010 at 7:13 AM Enjoyed this write here and have a great day. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown February 17, 2010 at 6:15 AM You have presented to us very interesting poetry today Simone. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick February 16, 2010 at 10:49 AM Basically there are two emotions fear and love. Perfect love casteth out all fear. It is not easy to stay in perfect love. Almost impossible even with the help of the Spirit you will find yourself being torn between the two. You have told some truth here in this write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara