I hope I followed the rules of Quietus better this time. Someone let me know if I made any mistakes. Thanks.
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(redo of Quietude, which I had done incorrectly for rules of a quietus poem) Peace abounds. Feel great calm; stay still. Deep silence you will hear. Watch sun sliding behind the hill. Can you feel God is near? This is my spirit’s food; with joy I am imbued in lovely quietude. Tranquil sounds. Peace abounds. Sept. 13, 2021 For the Quietus-August 2021 Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker
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