Notes About The Poem

I hope I followed the rules of Quietus better this time. Someone let me know if I made any mistakes. Thanks.

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Peace Abounds

(redo of Quietude, which I had done incorrectly for rules of a quietus poem)

Peace abounds. Feel great calm; stay still.
Deep silence you will hear.
Watch sun sliding behind the hill.
Can you feel God is near?

This is my spirit’s food;
with joy I am imbued
in lovely quietude.

Tranquil sounds.
Peace abounds.

Sept. 13, 2021
For the Quietus-August 2021 Poetry Contest
of Unseeking Seeker
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Alex Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:28 AM
Given peaceful space for Peace. A beautiful Work. Congratulations!
May Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea, Nicely done
Skelly Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 2:12 AM
This is a poem imbued with an atmosphere of peace, lovely...Delice
Ball Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Well done Andrea. Peace abounds in this well written poem. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 10:17 PM
I think you followed the rules very well. I still have to concoct one. Best for a win. Hugs.
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